SGA: Cleave, NC-17, McKay/Sheppard, 2/2

Jul 20, 2006 03:29

Cleave, Part 2, headers and etc can be found in Part 1.

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mckay/sheppard, sga, fic

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klo_the_hobbit July 20 2006, 07:59:31 UTC
WHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *shrieking babble of joy* I'm so happy you finished this! I can't tell you how insanely happy the ending makes me, after the heart clenching ache of the first section. *glomps you*
*klo*

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amireal July 20 2006, 17:19:12 UTC
*grins*

*sends out free samples of ear plugs to your neighbors*

THanks!

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sinclair_furie July 20 2006, 08:09:27 UTC
Ahhh... That was an awesome idea. I feel so bad for Rodney! And John! So cute!
Not to mention the incredible hotness which sort of turned my brain on a slow burn and melted me into a puddle of goo while I was too busy smiling at the pretty to notice.
*is in warm, fuzzy place*
Um, one typo I noticed, though- "He tipped his kind over gently" should be "He tipped his king over gently."

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amireal July 20 2006, 17:19:51 UTC
God we were both SO tired when I finally got the beta back. Type fixed, thanks!

*sends a mop* Glad you liked!

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enname July 20 2006, 08:11:23 UTC
*beams* Damn you write of the fast, yet also of the well.

Ya know, I just love the whole idea of that this is based on. The premise that having the ATA gene, if manipulated right could essentially make them all allergic to one person, or a series of people. Such a neat idea ... and it does work so well in this 'verse. Plus you know, there is a whole slew of touch deprived scenes, angst (yet there is humour) and wow, certain main characters not acting like thirteen year old girls. John especially. Although he is allowed to be nine. *nod*

Dark Angel. *g* Too funny. I must go and rewatch that show some year.

They whispered "yes they are; tube socks are the bomb."

*choke*

Also? You do realise that I will never, ever be able to look at a poncho without imagining damn hot sex against a wall? Ever. Oh, well, I'll go on somehow.

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amireal July 20 2006, 17:23:48 UTC
I should admit it now. Dark Angel was the inspiration. *koff* But it fit in so well with this universe. Better in some ways because the idea that the Wraith took their own idea and turned it around on them prolly never occured to Elizabeth et al.And you know the Wraith are pissed at the concept, so know painful but eventual living, nope, they're all about painful and quick dieing...

Plus you know, there is a whole slew of touch deprived scenes, angst (yet there is humour) and wow, certain main characters not acting like thirteen year old girls. John especially. Although he is allowed to be nine. *nod*

There isn't? And damnit, I tried to *hard* too. *koff*

As for the tube socks? There may have been begging on the part of some party that I no sully their virtue. *koff*

Also there is now a running list:

Things Ami has ruined *forever*:
1. Cornbread
2. TUBESOCKS
3. Ponchos

*proud*

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enname July 21 2006, 00:57:56 UTC
I thought it might have had something to do with DA, but you are right. That sort of sci fi storyline fits so nicely in here. After all we already have half of it from the human side of things. Why not go with the Wraith? Most of their tech seem to be semi living to begin with so it... see, the whole thing just makes so much sense. :)

*g* I am quite sure that somewhere there, Rodney almost cried like a little girl. Really. So you may have done it. *nods*

*blink* Maybe I am weird but tube socks had already been ruined for me. Huh. The poncho though?? That deserves at least three points on any scale. I am still in awe over it. Awe and possible lust.

*slaps self*

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wildestranger July 20 2006, 08:12:37 UTC
This is wonderful. Protracted courtship is a thing of joy and you write it delightfully. Very sweet and delicious. :)

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amireal July 20 2006, 17:24:07 UTC
*licks them*

*koff*

Thank you!

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wolfshark July 20 2006, 08:35:37 UTC
This was fabulous!

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amireal July 20 2006, 17:24:17 UTC
Woohoo!

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