My Baby, which still doesn't have a title

[amirynn]

Title: Untitled
Disclaimer: Do I look like I can draw? 'Course 's not my creation..
Warnings: Eventual Kyoya/Haruhi, and set in the post-grad-school future. Which means I'll probably have some manga spoilage in it. I don't really watch the anime, so it's just manga spoilers I'm obligated to warn about. ;P
Notes: It's starting to roll... Still

Comments

[diadori_san]

Wow!

Amazing! Give me more!

[amirynn]

....*gives you a really short paragraph? o.o;;*

Still dressed in casual clothing the twins would frown at, she unceremoniously takes the free chair at Kyoya's table and drops her briefcase to the ground. Kyoya frowns at her, but Haruhi ignores him in favor of stretching and ordering an herbal tea, white. Then she proceeds to pull a novel from a pocket and begin reading it. Everything is a deliberate ploy to annoy him.

[styromgalleries]

I cannot wait for some actual Kyouya and Haruhi interaction beyond a few words exchanged. I would love to see you flesh out the relationship between her and the twins a little more, too, you handled that really well in the first installment.

Anyway, I'm enjoying this and am looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing!

[amirynn]

I'm glad you enjoyed~! And Haruhi's relationships with everyone mentioned will be fleshed out, eventually... I promise! I just need to get the plot rolling, first...

[lady_mercury]

I love this. 8D And I love your writing style, for some reason I am in love with Haruhi's sarcastic attitude and... everyone just seems mature and down to earth. Short, quick, but still enough to satisfy the mind.

Now to wait for part four ;)

[amirynn]

<3~! Well, with short and quick, the next installment comes out faster, ne?

[paperdoll_dream]

love!
^__^
more, please!

[amirynn]

*shifty, shifty*

sneak peek somewhere in there...

[twerksie]

[AK! Nekozawa/Renge is taking over the whole world!!]

I love it - just stumbled upon your first and second chapters, and instantly fell in luuuurve.

I'm interested in being your beta if you haven't already found someone...

Lemme know if you're still in need of one, and if you're interested in little old me as yours~

<3 Complete love, if I may repeat. XD

[amirynn]

[Nekozawa/Renge? IT IS?! OH GOD!!! NOOOOOO!!!! RUN FOR YER LIVES!!!!!!!!!]

And, and, and---*ZOMPH* Reaally? Because, yes, I most definitely would love a beta. I mean, love to have a beta, um... e.e;;; *kicks the twins out of her mind so she can say things without stuttering and finding weird innuendo* Yes, please? o.o

[twerksie]

I would love to be your beta~ Just lemme know when, where, how, whatever questions you can come up with. XD

You can contact me at my gmail account: kimmyroffle@gmail.com

[I love your tags, btw - I know most of these things you're talking about! Bleach, HP, Host Club, Naruto, Tenipuri...]

[amirynn]

You are my heroine, once again! Um, I have the next installment [in the original piece, the end of the first chapter... But since that was on my crashed hard drive, we'll forget about it. :) ] done, probably in another day or two... Can I send it to you to look it over, then?

And if you want to poke me to make me faster, I'm at amirynn@gmail.com ;)

[*smilesmile* Yay! Bleach, I love Bleach, and Naruto, and... hehe. I'm glad you're a fan, too~!]