Kahlil Gibran is so right when he says.....

[amitvirmani]

Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth
until the hour of separation

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I do believe bonniee

[sunmaster15]

mis-placed her reply to your post...

yanking your chain

[sunmaster15]

if separation holds no worries for the lovers hearts,
could it be with eagerness that they doth part ?

doubts linger and questions arise,
we're never meant to be,
they quickly surmise...

greener pastures ahoy,they seek everyday...
The cat's in bed...and the sweet mice shall play

This is but a poem,
an ode if you will,
give me a smile,
bear me no ill...

i seek to tease,
Ohh!set ur mind at peace,
your love is strong...
this distance is but a breeze...
:)

Re: yanking your chain

[mannu]

Wah wah!

Re: yanking your chain

[sunmaster15]

Great stuff.

--Prithu

Re: yanking your chain

[amitvirmani]

well since u asked me to write something abt the poem....
i think its just awesome.....good work.....
i loved the last stanza.....thot that was amazing....