Comments | ammazzacaffe: it's your time to worry, my time to be alone- your reckless disposition drove me way from home;

inuyashacooks in ammazzacaffe

it's your time to worry, my time to be alone- your reckless disposition drove me way from home;

Jan 31, 2010 14:04

title: Like Music
pairing: Spain/Romano
rating: PG-13
summary: The way Spain moves is, to Romano, inexplicable as music. [written for tanya_tsuki for the sparo_xchange.]

( It was what put a cold thought in his mind, nervous shivers down his spine. Made him so unsure of himself that the world became formless, out of reach... )

♦character: spain, *gift, ♦character: romano, ☆fanfic, ♥pairing: spain/romano, !fandom: axis powers hetalia, ♠oneshot

Comments 18

tupelo_thief January 31 2010, 21:24:44 UTC

Romano listened careful- the stiff, crowded sound of cloth sounded almost like music

Spain held the posture- that posture that was everything he was- full of light and proud, with just a touch of something dark that Romano couldn’t figure.

dude, i dunno if i reviewed this before, but it deserves to be reviewed again B|. fuckin AWESOME yo, perfect spamano B|

inuyashacooks January 31 2010, 21:30:04 UTC

8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

THANK YOU!!!!! *morphs into dragon and heads on down to tony roma's*

also one of these days we gotta go to the five guys in bay terrace. just sayin.

tupelo_thief January 31 2010, 21:42:20 UTC

FIVE GUYS AND TONY FUCKIN ROMAS

CHICKACHICKA WUT?

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH IM READING KISS THE COOK AND ITS SO FUCKIN FUNNY AHAHAHAHAHAHAH THE WAY YOU WRITE ROMANO AND GERMANY XDDDDDDDDDD AND SPAIN XD. OH MY GAWD. SO STUPID. I LOVE IT XD

inuyashacooks January 31 2010, 22:04:42 UTC

XDDDD lololololol. im kind of thinking that i want to write a fail fic with just germany and romano. because theyre that awesome together.

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tanya_tsuki January 31 2010, 21:45:03 UTC

I adore your descriptions. They're so wonderful and it's, as the title implies, like music. Beautiful <3

inuyashacooks January 31 2010, 22:05:19 UTC

:DD thanks again! i really appreciate it :D

monelisa February 2 2010, 22:15:46 UTC

woww, poetic descripton; very different from your other fic. I like it though, even though the conclusion is ambiguous, but that's the point, right? Music, art in general, is a different thing to every person :] Thank you, for explaining what art really is! An expression of emotions! Of passion! The tamed wilderness that is Man's Bravery, as he faces the toro, it's an art. And Flamenco is the saddled wind that the dancers take the reigns of and use it to fly, clap, dance in an exuberant show of beauty! Art!!!

...gone a little too far there XDDD Very inspiring though, I enjoyed this fic :D Thanks for sharing!!

inuyashacooks February 2 2010, 23:20:12 UTC

haha, you didn't go too far- in fact I like that quite a bit, man's bravery as he faces the toro, and flamenco! bah :D art is very important; one of the most important things, I think ;)

thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed this one as well :D

aoi_aka February 8 2010, 18:19:43 UTC

You write so beautifully. I think I'm gonna stalk you. XD

Bullfighting is a cruel sport and I prefer not to watch it. I almost didn't read this but you (thankfully) didn't mention anything directly to do with the bulls. It was more about the fluid moments that make Antonio so fsckable even if Romano won't accept that.

inuyashacooks February 8 2010, 23:17:19 UTC

haha, contrary to the actual meaning of the word, LJ stalkers are pretty cool |D

I actually like bullfighting as a sport, but to each his own, and I can see where you're coming from. on that note I'm happy you read it anyway, and even moreso that you liked it! thank you muchly :DD

faerichylde March 10 2010, 06:33:27 UTC

so i thought i had commented on this but apparently not B| and so now i'm going to leave a long quote-fail comment.

The cape rushed as a wave; Spain smiled, wide and sunny. -Romano found himself under the spell of foreign words.

don't know why i loved this so much but i did; i feel like spain's smile is so bright, it just blows everything else away and romano, whose entire life is like hiding under something else, under false pretenses, romano is totally entranced by that.

just as dusty as the rest of this goddamn place, all dry with sun until nothing was hidden.

all dry with sun until nothing was hidden. that is why i love you so fuckin much. that's genius, srsly.

There was just that degree of strange grace, with just that hint of killing light sweeping past his eyes, that put Romano on edge.

is that conquistador!spain i see? because i love him... /fangirls

His eyes shifted to Spain, his skin, his bright eyes- that was it- heat- calenture, that craziness that can only understand itself. If he couldn’t use words to express it, ( ... )

inuyashacooks March 10 2010, 15:56:46 UTC

I love conquistador spain toooo :'D

I think you indirectly reviewed this in another comment? but I don't mind quote comments at all, thank you!!!! its good that you actually get it, sometimes I think I can ramble and be confusing XD but thank you again.

:/ what do you mean by that tho? you read it in class or sumthin?