you can use your body for a weapon, or to make some woman smile;

[inuyashacooks]

title: The World As A Windmill
characters: oc!Iraq, oc!Iran (wow let's make OCs out of controversial Middle Eastern nations huh, is that inappropriate or what ._.), Turkey, Greece, Japan, cameos by Egypt, America, and England; mentions of the Middle Eastern family
rating: PG-13
summary: A day in the life of Khalid. [AU]
note:-im not even sure why

Comments

[faerichylde]

i like this. seriously. i think in this more than any of ur other hetalia fiction i've read, the characters seem more like real people. maybe because you describe these comings-and-goings of their daily lives its more... real or somethin, idk. but the characters are all brilliantly distinct.

your khalid especially is a great character; the pulling from mehran and toward him is really poignant. the stream-of-consciousness was nice, i liked how his thoughts kind of... flowed?

also i loved your subtle references to the other characters, like america/england/japan etc.

thanks for writing this XD i really enjoyed reading it. i think that you are getting better, if that's even possible :DDD like your style of writing was always really good, but now your people, kind of, they're really clear and distinct.

anyway. yeah.

[inuyashacooks]

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD omggg thankyouuuuu! to be honest, I've always had a horrible time with original characters, so its ossim that you feel they're closer to reality :D and ahaha my hetalia stuff has honestly never been my best stuff, but its just so fun to write 8D

I'm really glad you enjoyed this :D thank you again!

[tupelo_thief]

so you know how much i love this already

B|

just going to point out again that youre fokin excellent at making mehran a real person. which is really awesome, and totally why we should write no puedes escapar!! together, as i myself am incapable of writing a non-outrageous mehran. that element will make "Khalid my flower" more believable. with our powers combined we are CAPTAIN PLANET B|.

axel: "*sigh* it sure ain't easy bein' Captain Planet, babe." XDDDDDDD cant you just SEE kasia's reaction to this "B|

[inuyashacooks]

and I love you *doublegun* no just kidding, you're pretty ghey. mwahahaha

lololol yeah for some reason I can actually see him being a person which is like illogical at best but yeah that's mai lief. *jumps into space suit* AHAHHHAHAHAH "WITH OUR POWERS COMBINED WE ARE CAPTAIN PLANET" nice placement there

XDDD I CAN see that being her reaction.

[tupelo_thief]

well you have herpes. so there.

why thank you!

[inuyashacooks]

lais. being a level seven scientologist I am invincible to disease.

tom cruise is fuckin crazy XD "tom cruise used confuse!" is basically the story of his life.