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Jun 27, 2010 12:26

finally some fic and not a fuckin fst

title: Affliction
pairing: Greece/Spain, implied Turkey/Greece
rating: PG
summary: Greece- dispassionate, unmovable by nature- asks Spain to define "passion" for him.
note: written for letsjamtogether via a prompt. if this has tense fail then please tell me- i wrote this all in present tense and then, realizing that present ( Read more... )

♦character: spain, ♦character: greece, ♥pairing: greece/spain, ☆fanfic, !fandom: axis powers hetalia, ♠oneshot

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faerichylde June 27 2010, 16:43:30 UTC
"poor sancho panza!" oh spain. brb hitting my head against a wall.

anyway, i reallyyyy liked this, and i know i say that about everything you write, but whatever. i liked it. i was all like "poor greece trying to find the definition of passion and thinking about turkey!" at the beginning. but by the end i was like "oh greece i know exactly what you're gonna do and -- damn! okay. well you shouldn't make sudden moves on someone like spain but hey with the view from here i'm not complaining."

wow, rambly. but i like your greece a lot, and i like the way you write him with or without turkey, like -- his actions around turkey are usually way different than his actions around other people, and you hit that on the head.

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inuyashacooks June 27 2010, 18:07:45 UTC
B)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

but anyway, thank you so muuuuuuuuch :DDDD im really glad you enjoyed this! thats good to hear about greece, i think ive mentioned that hes a little bit tougher to write than most characters. and about making moves on spain- maybe its better to make sudden moves, because hes really goddamn oblivious XDDD

XDDD i was beating myself with a spoon when i wrote that. spain, you are dazzling

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inuyashacooks June 27 2010, 20:29:49 UTC
8DDDDD JKDKWF IM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT. because you know i was kinda unsure and all but yeah 8D;

thank youuuuuuuuuu and yes, i shall post at that time. /throws cape over shoulder/

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planetari June 27 2010, 23:26:34 UTC
Ok, sir, lady, this was amazing and I want to watch your writing account so I can know whenever there is more of this if that's okay. It's late now but I definitely want go through the rest of your fanfiction tomorrow! You write Greece so perfect! I've wanted to see lover!Greece like this for so long, and I imagined his love to be just this straightforward, and that my pace part ohhh this just hits all the right spots, you know. ♥

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inuyashacooks June 28 2010, 02:52:49 UTC
:'D you dont know how happy this comment made me, hahahah. and of course its fine!

i really enjoyed writing this side of greece- hes just really fun to write in general 8DDD anyway thank you so much, i really appreciate it! :O and im glad you enjoyed it!

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didgeridoodle June 28 2010, 05:34:00 UTC
Your writing style just blows me away. There are loads of quotable quotes; and I like how everything is so seamless, with all those fine details sneaked in. I envy your writing style!

with that smoky grace of his

dsjghskjdfhsfh, how do you come up with this glorious stuff? ♥

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inuyashacooks June 28 2010, 06:33:16 UTC
/blushblushblush/

thank you so much :'DDD idk where it comes from. its prolly not me lol. its some kind of writing ghost that possesses me. anyway im really glad you liked this!

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kakkobean June 28 2010, 06:50:26 UTC
*flails* I love this pairing ♥

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inuyashacooks June 28 2010, 06:58:53 UTC
8D me too, all thanks to frostberryjam lol /flails as well/

thanks for commenting :D

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kakkobean June 28 2010, 08:06:06 UTC
we were infected by the same person, I see--clearly, we must now bother her to write more.

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inuyashacooks June 28 2010, 09:02:57 UTC
in the words of a famous doctor, "i have a fever- and the only prescription is MORE AWESOME."

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