title: What After Love [chapter 1.6/?]
pairing: Link/Sheik, Link/Zelda
rating: PG-13
summary: Where does love exist in this tunnel vision place? The city night doesn't give any answers, just looks back at you, waiting for your next move.
this chapter: Link, Sheik, and Zelda spend time together, and despite whatever nagging thoughts, whatever old
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/TURNS GREEN, SPORTS PURPLE SHORTS, BREATHES FIRE/
so, yeah. especially awesome things:
Link laughed. “I think Raven should be the leading lady,” he answered.
A private smile was exchanged and the thing went on until they’d formed a Christmas tree of lights; Sheik had a smile in his eyes, Link laughed, Raven was intensely frazzled. “Fucking- kids.” XD. i rly liked this whole paragraph, the descriptions of how everyone says bye to Zelda were rly boss.
“But I s’pose it wouldn’t be too poor a thing that she remain a statue just a little while longer ( ... )
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THANK YOU /conquers lesser peoples/ /stop- hammurabi time/
i hope to stop being a humungous jerk and have the next hap out relatively soon. EXCEPT I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN IN IT YEAH!!! /that painting guy with the afro/
this chapter was kinda unevenly paced i thought bc i had to start introducing their relationship, that of the three of them, but im glad you liked it homeslice B)
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OMG STORY OF MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEF. WAIT. you mean that dude from that awkward family photos book? if so /whips out engagement ring/
SHUT UP, IT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME
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Better late then never, not saying that it's incredibly clever.
How long ago had you promised this? Neh~ Worth the wait~ I adore your style, it makes me think about what they're actually saying. I love how you write Zelda, she seemed detached but completely down to earth. Link seems clueless, lost in the grown up's world of cigarette smoke and alcohol fumes. Nyeh~ Raven is as arrogant as ever, adorable but... how to put it... Something seems to be gnawing at his innards, like he regrets something.
But that could just be me.
Also, my ticket arrived a few weeks ago, I'll be asking if I can keep it after the concert. I am so hyped to see them. I also need to get Doncomatic when it's released. Daley has this voice that's so smooth and sweet that you could spread it over pancakes instead of syrup. It's hypnotizing, relaxing... /rambling
How have you been as of late? BD
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like a year ago almost XDDDD like a jerk. yeah it might be confusing with zelda; i have half-oot zelda and half-tp zelda in mind when i write her. i also imagine shed be sort of guarded; shes lived her whole life in public after all XD haha link is clueless, i always imagine him being somewhat childish. prolly just because hes a kid in an adults body, basically. and raven, yeah, everybody in general is gettin to the point in the story where they got issues.
!!! :D awesome! i hope you enjoy it. they look ossim in concert.
ive been okay, just been up to my usual stuff. how about you? school treating you well?
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It's okay, again. Better late then never. I don't mind, my Zelly seems to sit at an awkward phase of OoT/TP and a little Tetra. I can't stand a helpless princess as of late. I dunno, I always thought that she would be like, a complete child in private. Meh. Well, yeah. He is kinda a kid in a adults body but then again, he is a farm boy. The ones I met are anyway. Cool, so I'm not reading too far into something that isn't actually there. Poor Raven, just wanna hug him and give him some booze before sending him on his way.
I've heard they are~ I so can't wait. Just over a month away~
God, I hate school. Is that enough of an answer? Also, my new Xbox360 is distracting me. L4D2, as censored as it is for me, is horribly addictive. Goddamn zombies.
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I'm so dull sometimes.
How are you, I haven't talked to you in a long time.
Also, how 'bout that OoT remake?
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jfhfdsg. Hi. Gosh. It's been so long...
It makes me sad that you stopped this, honestly. I was hoping that you would've finished by now...
Anyway, now that I'm back I am open for requests or something? I don't know.
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