Belldom Poem. :D Enjoy!

[ammee_bliss]

It's when you seize hold of me
Melting our embodiments together with our feelings
In rapture and hunger
Fervor and desire
Within spiral movements
We lose control
Of reality
As we fly across years of rivalry
The battle which one to seizure the other
And fill a night after the other
To feel the ecstasy
Of one another

Comments

[numberoneuno]

Hi there! Really like the way you string words together. Very emotive.
:)

[ammee_bliss]

Hello!
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it :)

[dolce_piccante]

you already know i liked it :D

[ammee_bliss]

:D Yep, thankies! ^^

[avanicole]

*BLOWUP*

(says more than it needs to) :group:

[ammee_bliss]

Thank youy sweetie for these kind words. :P

[butter_cup01]

Very nice. Very well done.

:)

[ammee_bliss]

Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it.

[fenora]

Very beautiful and emotive... I loved your use of words ;)

In my humble opinion (especially considering it's poetry): very well done!!

[ammee_bliss]

Thank you! :) I'm so glad you liked it!

No need to get humble! lol Thank you for commenting! Much appreciated.