The Great Escape // Prologue

[amnesictouch]

Title: The Great Escape
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drama, romance
Word Count: 393
Disclaimer: Characters and plot are original. Reproduction of either is strictly forbidden.
Summary: When one is bound by true love, they experience a feeling of bliss. Time stands still, and moments are endless. But is there ever a time when this love becomes a hindrance?

Comments

[moonlitwish]

Ive...read this before...It still sounds so sweet x_x

I was expecting the other story though T_T

[moonlitwish]

Btw, I love, "Whenever he spoke, I could hear nothing but his voice. Whenever I was with him, everything else tuned out. My senses blurred. He was like a drug. An addiction. A fascination." You describe that feeling so well x_x

[suketeru]

yay I finally read it. sorry for being so late T__T

The idea sounds interesting. I'm curious where you'll take this from now on. My mind is imagining several scenarios ^__^

I like the non-clichéd, weird, freak telepathic connection ^__^ I think my fave part is: I think when we were together, the world really did stop turning, just for us. Of course something like that couldn’t really happen. I think for him, at one point, it did though. Now he can’t free himself.
Now that I think about it, it kind of feels like a summary of this prologue. It's got so many emotions packed in it.

On a more personal note, love being a drug, an addiction. These are thoughts that have been roaming around in my head lately. Love in a negative way. Somehow, the more I think about it, the more I hate the idea of falling in it. And this story seems to hold that negative side of it ^_^

OT: how are you doing? ^__^

[amnesictouch]

I've... been better. Definitely.

I haven't talked to you all that recently, but if I see you on MSN maybe we can catch up?

There's a couple of one-shots I'm working on right now. One I started last summer, and another I had to start to help my disoriented self.

Love in a negative way.
That wasn't my original intention, actually. I was thinking about when people experience love they become infatuated with that feeling, though not necessarily in a bad way. Like... some of my friends for example; once they've had a boyfriend/girlfriend they can't seem to go without one. They become accustomed to always having someone at their side.

But then again, now that I look at the storyline I have planned... Yeah, this definitely shows how love can have a negative effect. I never looked at it that way.

[suketeru]

I guess we all go thru that disorientation period some time in our life. I'm not sure I even got over mine, maybe just learned to live with it ^_^;; Ah sorry, those aren't very encouraging words, are they ^_^; Is your disorientation regarding your studies? Your future? Or more private things? Whatever it is, I hope you'll be able to find some answers soon. I'm glad you can resort to writing to put some order in your thoughts. I've recently realized that putting thoughts down in writing, even simple planning, makes things a lot easier.

I'd love to catch up with you on msn ^__^ any time you feel like a chat. I just worry always about disturbing people. Never know if you're busy studying or sth ^_^;;

I understand what you mean about love. It makes sense, too. But it's kind of sad as well. Love definitely can have both a positive and negative side. Depends on how each person interprets and lives it.

Looking forward to your one-shots ^__^

[tia_junan]

This is very intense. It reads like a diary entry. It's labeled a Prologue and it feels like one, a set-up to something more to come, there's no detail and no resolution. I think you capture a reader's interest with it though since it's sad and desperate and it truly hints at a bittersweet love story combined with mystery - what happened? Why?

Thanks for posting this though of course I'm clueless and late.

*Bows*

Ki