Eyes Like Honey - A Sakurai Sho Fanfic (14/?)

Jan 14, 2017 17:44

Pairing: Sakurai Sho x Fictional Female (Reader) *see note below
Rating: R for whole series, R/NC-17 for Ch.14
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word count: 5,057

Plot: A 33-year-old singleton, Nijishima Kokoro, finds herself at a host club where she meets the club's most popular host, Sakurai Sho. The encounter propels Kokoro to explore a different kind of ( Read more... )

sho, writings: fanfic, eyeslikehoney

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thelos22 January 14 2017, 19:02:32 UTC
2 nc-17 chapters in a row /wipe nosebleed/
I'm not really familiar with shoujo setting but I somehow sense that they're a bit distance? Kokoro seems as if she's hesitating and when will she call him Sho-chan!? ;_; *wait it's not comedy*
The conversation in my imagination is kinda stiff, but I definitely enjoy the story :))

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amnosxmatsujun February 2 2017, 08:47:18 UTC
Thanks for stopping by to read my fanfic! :) *hands you tissues for profuse nosebleeding* xD

That's a good question, hehe. If you were expecting a typical shoujo manga rom-com, the dialogue could appear to be formal. This is in the romance genre, but I added 'drama' just in case because the storyline is a lot maturer and darker, in a way. Plus, some couples call each other with the "-san" honorific, believe it or not. ;)

Ch.15 is up if you're interested in what happens next!

(My next Sho fanfic is a "Sho-chan" kind of fanfic, actually! :D )

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samiraisfan January 14 2017, 19:43:57 UTC

MamaShooo! Woohoo! OMG, 34 is going serious with Kokorosan 😍😍😍
And kinda wondered what happened to 34 to be so lusty for the bedtime ... Will be explained somehow? πŸ™
Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter of this fic 😁

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amnosxmatsujun February 2 2017, 08:50:02 UTC
Thanks for reading my fanfic! <3 It's a big step forward for Sho-san, don't you think? ^^

Ahaha, "lusty for bedtime" ;) You'll get an explanation in later chapters, don't worry! But for now, what will the woman in the room reveal? How will Kokoro react? Ch.15 is up to answer those questions~!

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aussiestorm January 14 2017, 23:34:39 UTC
LOVE IT! If this was released as a novel, I think I would have to read it in one go! Oh, the angst, the cliffhangers......... I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

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amnosxmatsujun February 2 2017, 08:51:44 UTC
Thanks for reading my fanfic! <3 Aaah, wow *blush* yours is a truly humbling comment. I appreciate the encouragement!

It is flirting with angst, isn't it? What happens next? Ch.15 is up if you're interested~!

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haku_nineno January 15 2017, 03:21:11 UTC
Uhhh the angst vibe is strong in this chap ;___; (i have a weak fluffy heart so my angst-standard is very low compared to others so yeah xD) it's not that you write it in a dark, gloomy vibe, but it's more like how i imagine all the things you wrote here is leading to something i can't quite catch where it's going to lead for now. you left me puzzled .... AND I LOVE IT!! What a way to make us gladly hanging on the cliff lol xD ( ... )

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amnosxmatsujun February 2 2017, 09:02:44 UTC
OMG your comments always make me smile <3 Maybe it's because I can picture the different emotions crossing your mind as you read different parts of the chapter...?

There is some angst, isn't there... I totally understand. I'm happy you noticed the subtle shift because the changes are internal, which is why it's hard to put a finger on it and identify why.

Haha! Now, every time you see Sho-kun in magazines or TV shows, you'll get glimpses of 34 ;) You're right, Sho-san placed complete trust in Kokoro's tastes, didn't he? x3 Kokoro is also getting more comfortable expressing her frustrations.

YES WE CAN CERTAINLY TALK ABOUT THE HALLWAY ACTIVITY!! D: Do you have twitter? Because I posted THIS (click it and see) and honestly, I can't see his anan the same way anymore, either x_x

What will the woman in the room reveal? How will Kokoro react? Ch.15 is up now if you're interested~!

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haku_nineno February 2 2017, 16:31:48 UTC
and your fic always make me smile ;) maybe that's why? it's really cool if it is! xD

AND OMG THE HALLWAY ACTIVITY IS A TOTAL GIFT!!! Truth is, i can't imagine Sho-kun 'lost' his control (as we hardly listen to the story when he's totally drunk from interview or something else), but this Sho-san is giving up to his needs. immediately. in the hallway. his bang is falling in front of his eyes, his eyes dark with lust, his lips parting just to grasp some air ..... My ovaries explode just from picturing that!!! *GASP* YES THAT'S THE ONE I REFER TO!! This anan shot is so hot even when he's fully clothed, and because of this i can imagine he's not fully clothed afterwards lol xD oh and yes! i have twitter, @rakhmaleana is my account ;) sometimes i saw your updates from twitter but usually the email got me first, like this time xD but i always looking forward for your release so either way is fine for me :D

whooops gonna get the next chapter asap, catch you later!

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sunrize_88 January 15 2017, 03:26:31 UTC
aaawww hugs sho! wow, they are moving fast! its meet the sick parent day already...what could possibly be the problem? waiting for the next chapter!

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amnosxmatsujun February 2 2017, 09:03:44 UTC
Thanks for continuing to read my fanfic! :)

What will the woman in the room reveal? How will Kokoro react? Ch.15 is up if you're interested~!

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