Eyes Like Honey - A Sakurai Sho Fanfic (15/?)
Pairing: Sakurai Sho x Fictional Female (Reader) *see note below
Rating: R for whole series, PG-13 for Ch.15
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word count: 5,407
Plot: A 33-year-old singleton, Nijishima Kokoro, finds herself at a host club where she meets the club's most popular host, Sakurai Sho. The encounter propels Kokoro to explore a different kind of ( Read more... )
Rating: R for whole series, PG-13 for Ch.15
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word count: 5,407
Plot: A 33-year-old singleton, Nijishima Kokoro, finds herself at a host club where she meets the club's most popular host, Sakurai Sho. The encounter propels Kokoro to explore a different kind of ( Read more... )
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Emkay-san is kind. I love the way you reply the comments and remind them the next chapter's up
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Aww, I'm very humbled by your comment. This chapter actually went through many, many edits, so I'm really happy to hear that you found it "beautiful." As for commenting back, it's the least I can do for my faithful readers. Thanks for waiting for the new chapters.
Ch.16 is ready now! Where does Sho-san take Kokoro? ;)
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Ch.16 is ready to read if you're interested in where Sho-san takes Kokoro~ ;)
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CAN I SAY I CANT STOP FALLING FOR SHOOOO???!!!! ♥♥♥
This chap is amazingly fluffy, and I like Sho's mum a loot. Hope she will be fine soon :)
and finally some new infos about his past, yeey!! I am sooo happy he think of forgiving himself and he want Koko to make him happy. Cant wait for the trip hehe :3 good luck in next chapter :)
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A little fluff chapter after a couple NC-17 ones to make sure my readers don't die from all the blood loss x_x I also like Sho-san's mom, too, hehe. I wanted it to be obvious that he was her son, so they seem to speak similarly: cryptic and always in control of the conversation.
Forgiving yourself is usually the hardest thing to do, so this is a big step for Sho-san! Ch.16 is ready now if you're interested in where he takes Kokoro! ;)
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I'm going to tell you for the past two days, I binge-reading this fanfiction!
I love it so much! Your fan fiction is so page turner.
I love how well developed characters of the suave Sho and Kokoro. They're really completed each other by showing each other vulnerable side and solve their problem together. My top fave scenes so far are when Sho's got fever and their date at the beach. I'm so excited for the next date!
I wonder if Hayato is one of 3 people that Sho's ever brought to meet his mom. Also I'm so curious about how Sho's development in reaching his dream to become photographer, along the way I hope Kokoro find her dreams too...
Sorry if I'm babbling too much, but I'm soo looking forward to the next chapter! Good luck!
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My style of writing (or just my personality, I guess) won't allow for underdeveloped characters. ^^; The events within the story are important, but even more vital is a strong character development. It's not everyone's cup of tea, so I'm very happy to hear that that was one of the parts you enjoy about my writing. :) Ah! I'm a fan of those two scenes, too, hehe. Coincidentally, Sho-san chooses to be vulnerable in those scenes...
The other two people his mother have met will be revealed in later chapters ;) Knowing more about his past, you want to him to achieve his dreams of becoming a photographer! ;_; You even go a step further and wonder about Kokoro's dreams <3 ( ... )
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