Ngl, that was literally my expression while reading this chapter.
You wrote NINO! I wasn't thinking of him at all when you posted the heads-up on Twitter, and to have him here is such a delight. His backstory with Shion-chan seems like a heartbreaker, though. Still, you've made me look forward to reading more on his relationship with both Maa-kun and Shion-chan (especially since what he revealed to Maa-kun doesn't seem to be the whole truth). Good job!
I also love that having this chapter in Nino's POV drives the plot of the story especially for Aiba and Kusunoki, and in turn reveals more about them. I have my theories, but I'll keep them to myself for now. XD Looking forward to the next chapters!
x3 I loved your reaction! Thanks for reading, dearie <3
Yeeeeeah... you know, Nino is my favorite character to write (Sho is second). He's always "written himself" in my fanfics, so to speak, so I let him dictate the flow of my stories. I know, it sounds weird but Nino has that effect on me, hehe. As for his history with Shion-chan, you'll find out more in successive chapters ;)
There's a main narrative (Aiba), but those around him propel the story forward. Do you write or read often? I'm smiling at your comment because you're noticing things I want you to notice!
To answer your question, I can't write stories to save my life. XD Technical writing, perhaps, since I work in IT. However, I do love to read and can nitpick quite a bit on things, so if I ever decide to pursue it I would actually love to be a beta reader. Thank you for the compliment! :)
I do understand how characters tend to just "write themselves." I have writer friends (not for the Arashi fandom) who experience that with their characters so it's not weird, don't worry.
Okay, so I finally got your comment to post properly! I'm not sure why it was doing that, but yay! Thanks for PM-ing me and continuing to read my fanfics <3 You're a regular, hehe.
I'm glad you like Nino's POV, because I like writing Nino the most! ;) I remember your love for fluff, and there were definitely many moments in this chapter that would turn up the "kyun" factor.
Aww, yeah, my rl has been crazy, too. I'm glad you finished everything and that my fanfic was a little treat for you. Go pamper yourself! :)
So I was excited to know how Nino sees Aiba in this chapter, but the moment Nino said "Shion-chan" I was intrigued! Oh my, what does he know about her secret? What happened between them if he fell for her in the past? And notably he noticed that Aiba was falling in love!!! I can't wait for my questions to get answered. Haha. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter 💛💚
Hehe, yeah. "Shion-chan" is a loaded title, isn't it? As the story continues, things will become a bit clearer and also a lot more complicated ^^; What does Nino know about her?
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Ngl, that was literally my expression while reading this chapter.
You wrote NINO! I wasn't thinking of him at all when you posted the heads-up on Twitter, and to have him here is such a delight. His backstory with Shion-chan seems like a heartbreaker, though. Still, you've made me look forward to reading more on his relationship with both Maa-kun and Shion-chan (especially since what he revealed to Maa-kun doesn't seem to be the whole truth). Good job!
I also love that having this chapter in Nino's POV drives the plot of the story especially for Aiba and Kusunoki, and in turn reveals more about them. I have my theories, but I'll keep them to myself for now. XD Looking forward to the next chapters!
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Yeeeeeah... you know, Nino is my favorite character to write (Sho is second). He's always "written himself" in my fanfics, so to speak, so I let him dictate the flow of my stories. I know, it sounds weird but Nino has that effect on me, hehe. As for his history with Shion-chan, you'll find out more in successive chapters ;)
There's a main narrative (Aiba), but those around him propel the story forward. Do you write or read often? I'm smiling at your comment because you're noticing things I want you to notice!
Ch.5 is up now if you're interested ;)
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I do understand how characters tend to just "write themselves." I have writer friends (not for the Arashi fandom) who experience that with their characters so it's not weird, don't worry.
I'm off to read chapter 5!
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The fluff level in this chapter is no joke, i have this stupid grin this whole chapter <3 ( ... )
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I'm glad you like Nino's POV, because I like writing Nino the most! ;) I remember your love for fluff, and there were definitely many moments in this chapter that would turn up the "kyun" factor.
Aww, yeah, my rl has been crazy, too. I'm glad you finished everything and that my fanfic was a little treat for you. Go pamper yourself! :)
Ch.5 is ready now if you're interested ;)
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I can't wait for my questions to get answered. Haha. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter 💛💚
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Hehe, yeah. "Shion-chan" is a loaded title, isn't it? As the story continues, things will become a bit clearer and also a lot more complicated ^^; What does Nino know about her?
Ch.5 is up now if you're interested ;)
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Yeah... who is this Kusunoki girl? Ch.5 is up if you're interested~!
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It's getting interesting.. Aiba will be very grateful to Nino.. XD
Don't worry Nino you're still my favorite..
Can't wait for the next chap..
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Let's see what happens next: Ch.5 is ready if you're interested~!
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