I just finished reading chapter 6 yesterday, so to have this chapter up so soon makes me really happy! Thank you for this. :)
I like how this chapter further illustrates how Aiba's heart is "in the right place," to quote Nino from chapter 4. I can't help but chuckle a bit on how Aiba described himself as a "half-decent" man. He's definitely way more decent than the person who hurt Kusunoki, so he ought to give himself more credit.
For some reason I can't imagine how a DoS Aiba would scream on a roller coaster because my mind is interchanging your Aiba for Gozen-sama instead, and I can't fathom yet if Gozen-sama is actually someone who would ride a roller coaster to please a lady. Doesn't seem like a nobleman's pastime. XDDDD
When Aiba mentioned that he wanted a "healthy, happy secretary," I couldn't help but think "You may be the answer to your own request, you idiot. You want to be the one to make her smile, don't you?" But then again it's not like he hasn't tried. XD Maybe he just needs to try harder.
For a pompous boss, he doesn't give himself enough credit when it comes to caring about women, don't you think? He has his reasons and insecurities, but I'm hoping he realizes just how wrong he is as the story continues... :)
Ahaha, if you're imagining Gozen-sama, him on a roller coaster is a funny image xD It may not have been super obvious in the writing, but Aiba also stepped out of his comfort zone during this outing in order to accommodate Shion. <3
Ch.8 is written from Shion's POV. This chapter should further solidify your thoughts about Aiba-sama. ;) Happy reading~!
OMMMGG !!! this is my first time reading a fanfic , i've been in fandom for 4 years but never tried to read fanfictions :D but this one is just great , i haven't commented before in your previous chapters , i'm sorry ><, but thank you very much , i love it , i really appreciate it , it makes my heart goes doki doki :D with every chapter , i was thinking yesterday what would happen to aiba , how he'll react about what he saw ! and then horraaay *.* , I love it The last part just killed me ;___; kyaaaaaaa ~~~
Now i'm so excited what will bring the next chapter *.* !! Do your best !! looking forward to it !
Hey there! Thanks for stopping by to read my fanfic :D Whenever I hear from a reader that my fanfic is the first fanfic they've ever read, I feel extremely humbled and also a little nervous because I hope that I would be a gateway for more reading to come. ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying my writing so far, and thanks for your feedback! I always love hearing from my readers.
Hehe, the end makes my heart go *kyun* <3 Ch.8 is ready to read now, if you're interested in what happens next. ;)
ahhh i'm happy that aiba can make her happy. but i'm really curious of what happen to her. what about the scar. i hope it will be revealed soon. i have my own suspicions but i'll just wait for it hehehe. thank you for writing. i had fun reading it.
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I hope Kusonoki will get better for real and I'm still curious about the injury :((
Thanks for this chapter!!!
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Ch.8 is a Shion POV (finally!), and the story really starts moving with this one. Happy reading! :D
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I like how this chapter further illustrates how Aiba's heart is "in the right place," to quote Nino from chapter 4. I can't help but chuckle a bit on how Aiba described himself as a "half-decent" man. He's definitely way more decent than the person who hurt Kusunoki, so he ought to give himself more credit.
For some reason I can't imagine how a DoS Aiba would scream on a roller coaster because my mind is interchanging your Aiba for Gozen-sama instead, and I can't fathom yet if Gozen-sama is actually someone who would ride a roller coaster to please a lady. Doesn't seem like a nobleman's pastime. XDDDD
When Aiba mentioned that he wanted a "healthy, happy secretary," I couldn't help but think "You may be the answer to your own request, you idiot. You want to be the one to make her smile, don't you?" But then again it's not like he hasn't tried. XD Maybe he just needs to try harder.
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Ahaha, if you're imagining Gozen-sama, him on a roller coaster is a funny image xD It may not have been super obvious in the writing, but Aiba also stepped out of his comfort zone during this outing in order to accommodate Shion. <3
Ch.8 is written from Shion's POV. This chapter should further solidify your thoughts about Aiba-sama. ;) Happy reading~!
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Ahhh lovely, Masaki!💚
I love this chapter, but somehow it feels too short for me (≧∇≦)
i cant wait to read the next chapter as well😆
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this is my first time reading a fanfic , i've been in fandom for 4 years but never tried to read fanfictions :D
but this one is just great , i haven't commented before in your previous chapters , i'm sorry ><, but thank you very much , i love it , i really appreciate it , it makes my heart goes doki doki :D with every chapter , i was thinking yesterday what would happen to aiba , how he'll react about what he saw ! and then horraaay *.* , I love it The last part just killed me ;___; kyaaaaaaa ~~~
Now i'm so excited what will bring the next chapter *.* !!
Do your best !! looking forward to it !
** sorry i'm not good at giving feedbacks xd **
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Hehe, the end makes my heart go *kyun* <3 Ch.8 is ready to read now, if you're interested in what happens next. ;)
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thank you for writing. i had fun reading it.
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Ch.8 is ready to read if you're interested! It's Shion's POV so it may reveal more about her ;)
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