Eyes Like Honey - A Sakurai Sho Fanfic (17/?)

[amnosxmatsujun]

Pairing: Sakurai Sho x Fictional Female (Reader) *see note below
Rating: R for whole series, NC-17 for Ch.17
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word count: 5,714

Plot: A 33-year-old singleton, Nijishima Kokoro, finds herself at a host club where she meets the club's most popular host, Sakurai Sho. The encounter propels Kokoro to explore a different kind of

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[tobefree0714]

Oh my goodness where do I even start

[amnosxmatsujun]

Hey you! <3

I mean, how could she (or any of us, for that matter) resist 34 in the onsen?! T__T I debated whether to write those scenes a little more graphically, but as I began, it made more sense to accentuate the sensuality of it because the air about them was warm and sweet. Thanks for commenting on that, because I did purposefully choose to write in this way.

The kid actually wrote itself into the story. Sometimes, my fingers just start going and I roll with it. 34 also writes himself sometimes, so he’s leading me in this storyline.

You’ve really been a huge encouragement in helping me continue with this series, so thank you for being such an avid and dedicated reader. Your comment made me smile :) 34 has his cryptic ways but he’s certainly a charmer.

I didn’t leave you with a cliffhanger for too long this time. ;) Ch.18 is ready to read!

[farrasya]

Thank you so much for informing that the new chapter has arrived!
I love the story so much... Thank you for keep going on.
I reread again the whole story before reading the new chapter. LOL

Another revelation on Sho's past, I really can't wait to read on how you're going to solve this problem.
The suspense through the end, it's so intense that I make some speculations, it's such a good cliffhanger...

[amnosxmatsujun]

Hi there! :) Thanks for continuing to read my fanfic. It really is avid readers like you who encourage me to keep writing. <3 You read all 17 chapters in one go? *_*

I did intentionally make things a little intense. ;) Ch.18 is up if you'd like to find out what Sho said!

[floops]

Hi Emkay! I saw your tweet about a new chapter posted for your fanfic and on a whim I followed the link to read it! I don't normally read fanfics but as I read this newest chapter I was so captivated by your storytelling that I went back and started reading from the beginning

[amnosxmatsujun]

Hi there! (How should I address you? ^^) First of all, thank you for finding your way to my fanfic and dedicating your time to reading all 17 chapters...! I'm very impressed and humbled at the same time. I actually *only* write member x oc fics, which makes me a huge minority. When I first started writing ELH, I was writing to satisfy my own need for a Sho x OC, lol. But as I continued writing, kind readers like yourself encouraged me to keep going. I had taken a long, unintended break from writing, but I'm glad I'm back. :D

Your comment is truly a humbling one because one of my goals when writing fanfics is to paint the scene as if the reader can see what's happening, kind of like how you described it being a TV drama. Character development is also super important to me, so it's really hard for me to write one-shots. ^^; Some want the action right away but I tend to take my sweet time. That's super cute that you see similarities between Sho and your hubby! He must be really attuned to your needs and know you very well. <3

[floops]

Sorry for the lack of a proper introduction!! You can call me Flo ^__^ I'm surprised and happy that you recognize my handle even from way back then! I unintentionally drifted away for a few years (RL took over) and only came back to Arashi last year so I kind of feel like a new fan all over again!

I agree, everyone has their own preferences with fics and storytelling but yours certainly aligns with mine!

Thanks for letting me know the new chapter is up!! I was so giddy when I saw the comment notification from you! XD Also excited that you have another story in the works too! Ganbatte!!

[stormfordream]

Hello! I just discovered your fic and wow I wasn't able to stop reading. Can't wait to see more of these two! You're really doing a great job ^^

[amnosxmatsujun]

Hi there! :D Thank you so much for stopping by to read my fanfic and for your encouraging words! It's truly readers like you who keep me going. <3

Ch.18 is up if you're ready to see what happens next~!

[teri12576]

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! OMG, you are really back?! I am sooo glad. October sure is a magical month. It is great you did not throw away this fic because it is a great one and it would be pity. I adore your writing skills...you can perfectly create the mood and make it hot without it being rude or sweet, cute, serious in a very natural way. And agaaain your cliffhangers. Don't you dare to disappear for 3 years again haha. Sorry I am joking. Please take your time. One must wait for quality and good things. I already can sense you have many aces in your sleeves prepared for us. All the best ♥

[amnosxmatsujun]

I'm really baaaack! ;) Very happy to see that you're still around! Thanks for continuing to read my fanfic. I owe so much to avid readers like you because you encourage me to keep writing. <3

I purposefully went the sensual route instead of smut because I just felt like the air about them was warm and dreamy. I didn't want to "ruin" it with over-the-top raunchiness. I know, I know. I'm a cliffhanger type of writer ^^; But I didn't leave you hangin' too long this time: Ch.18 is up if you'd like to find out what happens next!

I'm getting to the part in the story that I've been wanting to write since I began this series, so my fingers are dancing on the keyboard, lol. Hope you enjoy~!

[teri12576]

Awww so glad your comeback is real and no you don't owe us anything. You are human with real-life struggles like anyone else so it is good to take a break when it is needed. We as readers should really be thankful for coming back with this story. ♥