Sorry ... I have no idea why it's screwing up my journal link I fixed it like twice. So uhm yeah.
Your Name/Nickname Meggi Your Age: 19 Your AIM/MSN/YIM: ione survivor (AIM) Personal Journal: nan_desu_ka Character Applying for: Uchiha Sasuke
Background: Before the rule of Jupiter, the Uchiha clan was renown for its prestige and wealth around Amoigakure. Uchiha Fugaku, Sasuke's father, was the head chief of police and famous for keeping crime off of the streets of Amoi. A learned and astute man, Fugaku had climbed high in rank while still young and was doing very well for himself and his wife, Uchiha Mikoto. A little before the drastic change in the caste system and the arrival of Jupiter, Fugaku and Mikoto conceived and were delighted over the prospect of having a child, preparing for its arrival. Shortly after Itachi was born, however, things began to stir in the world of politics, and as the power suddenly changed hands, Fugaku and Mikoto were left in shock as all of their wealth and material goods were stripped from them and
( ... )
Believing his brother, Sasuke stayed with Itachi, growing to hate the upper class and its discrimination, and Jupiter most of all. Learning from his brother, Sasuke became adept at thievery and other illegal jobs, including selling drugs or weapons as soon as his brother got in with a gang in the area, Itachi becoming the leader and head of his own illegal trafficking organization, leading to a huge increase in crime. Sasuke found it was easier to get money living the life of a criminal, and it wasn't long before his young, pretty teenage body was attracting the eye of well-off individuals looking for a good time. Sasuke found he didn't mind selling his body either, and began to do that as well, stealing whatever he could get his hands on if his customer happened to make a mistake and bring him home. Sometimes he would feel the urge to kill them, especially when he happened to be propositioned by a customer with blond hair, his hatred and loathing for all members of the high class firmly ingrained, but fear of the repercussions,
( ... )
You have been accepted. Please join amoigakure and amoigakure_ooc with your character journal, then take note in the taken characters post. You may also post in the OOC community and introduce yourself if you wish.
Once I come up with a more solid timeline, we can adjust it and such. The only things I can see that'd need to be changed is the ages, because I'm rather unsure about how long JUPITER has been in power (between 15-20 years).
But it is perfect! Nice job. And welcome aboard, Uchiha Sasuke!
Ok. Yeah, I wasn't really sure either so I just fiddled with the time period. I had it in my mind it was around twenty years or something. But thanks. ^^
Writing Sample:Working two jobs wasn't as hard as Sakura had initially thought it would be. The only thing that had been a problem was the first time she coordinated the schedules, since she'd been a new employee in both locations and hadn't wanted to press her luck, due to the fact that both places were owned by upper class citizens. Once it had been sorted out that she could flip-flop easily between the two with time for showers and quick bites of food in between, though, she found that she was as good at balancing two jobs as someone doing it twenty years would have been
( ... )
You have been accepted. Please join amoigakure and amoigakure_ooc with your character journal, then take note in the taken characters post. You may also post in the OOC community and introduce yourself if you wish.
Your Name/Nickname Milly Your Age: 20 Your AIM/MSN/YIM: Jaid Skywalker/jadeshadow85@hotmail.com/sandrockgal Personal Journal jade_vixen Character Applying for: Hatake Kaakshi Background: Hatake Sakumo was a relatively wealthy and influential man - a former war hero - when Sir Jupiter began the sytem implements. Sakumo and his young child, Kakashi were both light-haired, although his wife - Kodachi was not. Sakumo refused to give her up and led a dissent against the new laws. As a result, he and Kodachi were privately but rather gruesomely executed. Kakashi, still a very young child, was forced to witness it in order to impress on his young mind the consequences of disobeying the law
( ... )
You did just fine! I know it sounds really formal, but...
You have been accepted. Please join amoigakure and amoigakure_ooc with your character journal, then take note in the taken characters post. You may also post in the OOC community and introduce yourself if you wish.
Comments 86
Your Name/Nickname Meggi
Your Age: 19
Your AIM/MSN/YIM: ione survivor (AIM)
Personal Journal: nan_desu_ka
Character Applying for: Uchiha Sasuke
Background: Before the rule of Jupiter, the Uchiha clan was renown for its prestige and wealth around Amoigakure. Uchiha Fugaku, Sasuke's father, was the head chief of police and famous for keeping crime off of the streets of Amoi. A learned and astute man, Fugaku had climbed high in rank while still young and was doing very well for himself and his wife, Uchiha Mikoto. A little before the drastic change in the caste system and the arrival of Jupiter, Fugaku and Mikoto conceived and were delighted over the prospect of having a child, preparing for its arrival. Shortly after Itachi was born, however, things began to stir in the world of politics, and as the power suddenly changed hands, Fugaku and Mikoto were left in shock as all of their wealth and material goods were stripped from them and ( ... )
Reply
Reply
Once I come up with a more solid timeline, we can adjust it and such. The only things I can see that'd need to be changed is the ages, because I'm rather unsure about how long JUPITER has been in power (between 15-20 years).
But it is perfect! Nice job. And welcome aboard, Uchiha Sasuke!
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Welcome, Haruno Sakura!
Reply
Your Age: 20
Your AIM/MSN/YIM: Jaid Skywalker/jadeshadow85@hotmail.com/sandrockgal
Personal Journal jade_vixen
Character Applying for: Hatake Kaakshi
Background: Hatake Sakumo was a relatively wealthy and influential man - a former war hero - when Sir Jupiter began the sytem implements. Sakumo and his young child, Kakashi were both light-haired, although his wife - Kodachi was not. Sakumo refused to give her up and led a dissent against the new laws. As a result, he and Kodachi were privately but rather gruesomely executed. Kakashi, still a very young child, was forced to witness it in order to impress on his young mind the consequences of disobeying the law ( ... )
Reply
Reply
You have been accepted. Please join amoigakure and amoigakure_ooc with your character journal, then take note in the taken characters post. You may also post in the OOC community and introduce yourself if you wish.
Welcome aboard, Hatake Kakashi!
Reply
Leave a comment