As Long as You're Mine 3/3

Jul 08, 2011 01:22

Title: As Long as Your Mine Chapter 3
Pairing: Kurt/Blaine
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 5200+ (This Part)
Warnings: Explicit sex (blowjobs, fingering, anal)Language
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer:Glee is not, never has been, nor ever will be mine.If it was, it would be the Klaine show, and it would be on HBO, so we could have the smut. :)
Summary: Kurt ( Read more... )

nc-17, hummelson verse, kurt/blaine, fic, as long as you're mine, glee

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januaryfreeze92 July 8 2011, 15:17:39 UTC
That was the perfect ending! I loved how sweet is all was, and the little moments where nerves and awkwardness showed - It still is their first time, after all. Wonderful job!

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amordemealma July 8 2011, 15:41:36 UTC
thank you so much! you have NO idea how much I struggled writing this, it means a lot that it hit a cord with my readers!

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callmerayray July 8 2011, 18:14:48 UTC
Lovely lovely lovely, my darling. And see, lots of reviews, and everyone thinks it's hot. You had NOTHING to worry about!

(But you know this means I'll just be pestering you for more porn in the future. Mmmhmm. Yup.)

Also, dancing!Darren icon to celebrate you popping your porn cherry. ;D

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amordemealma July 8 2011, 18:32:43 UTC
lol! did you re-read it? because I added some more Kurt thoughts like you suggested. so...read it to see if it's better...added stuff happens not long after the condoms line...

and yes, working on the second PWP for the hummelson!verse as we speak. .

And Darren can dance for me any time.

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callmerayray July 8 2011, 18:55:29 UTC
You know me, I never re-read. But I went back after you mentioned it, and yes, it's good. Kurt's such an emotional person, that it just needed a little more and what you added definitely helped. You're fabulous, as always.:)

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amordemealma July 8 2011, 20:12:38 UTC
I'm glad you approved. i changed a few details too... I decided i didn't like the focus being on Blaine's erratic thrusting...cause...that to me made it seem like Kurt was just lying there...and I decided it needed to be more mutual. I hope it works better...

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latereader July 8 2011, 19:59:56 UTC
Loved this whole set of fics. I love nervous, but considerate Blaine... I love Kurt being so overwhelmed by the emotions he doesn't realize he's crying...
This is my favorite line though: "Hey," Blaine said and tugged at Kurt's chin with his free hand, forcing Kurt to look at him. "None of that. You're stunning."
Thank you again for sharing.

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amordemealma July 8 2011, 20:14:53 UTC
Oh I'm so glad you liked the stunning line! I just...It seemed so natural that Kurt would be a little embarrassed and self conscious, and Blaine would definitely try to ease his mind about it.

Thank you for reading!

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mockingbirdq July 9 2011, 16:13:53 UTC
Aww... so sweet. Loved the nerves and tears and all the emotional focus of a first time, which you really captured for these characters :)

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amordemealma July 9 2011, 17:05:46 UTC
Thank you so much bb! I'm glad the emotions worked for you!

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emilianadarling July 25 2011, 01:00:03 UTC
Super sweet, lovely! :) Loved the fact that they did, in fact, end up using both beds. XD And how wonderful that their first time was perfect; not because of the actions, but because of the emotions and the people involved. The nerves and tears and minor-freak outs and uncomfortableness were perfect. Super lovely, bb!

DANCE PARTY TO CELEBRATE!


... )

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amordemealma July 25 2011, 03:22:24 UTC
LMAO!

that GIF! It's so perfect! mind if I grab it?

I'm glad you liked it bb! you have no idea how hard it was to write this! the smut! i mean I wanted to write it...but, having no frame of reference...it was difficult to say the least. But then I went and got a boyfriend and inspiration hit...LOL. anyways, I'm glad it all worked for you. and Thanks for mentioning the beds! I have to admit I'm a little surprised that you're the first one to mention that fact...hmmmmm....

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emilianadarling July 25 2011, 05:25:25 UTC
Of course you can grab it! I thought you would love it; is why I posted. <3 <3

AHAHAHAHA amazing. XD And no worries about mentioning beds! It was a very prominent detail for me, but sometimes the most prominent details are the ones that get overlooked in reviews. :)

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