Comments | amouralamer: [Songfic] Shadows of the Night

amouralamer

[Songfic] Shadows of the Night

Oct 31, 2008 19:34

Title: Shadows of the Night
Author: Amouralamer
Length: Oneshot
Pairings: Jaejoong/Changmin
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
A/N: Songfic to "Shadows of the Night" by Pat Benetar.
Never thought I'd write a songfic, but this won't get out of my head.^^

Summary: Changmin doesn't think that this can work between them. Not in the long run.

Disclaimer: ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, jaejoong/changmin, length: oneshot, genre: romance

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amouralamer November 1 2008, 05:22:00 UTC

Thanks!♥

I love Pat Benetar, I really should get one of her cds!

hollyhockyuu November 1 2008, 05:34:56 UTC

"The touches look innocent and only the two of you know that they are because you can't keep your hands to yourself."

That was epic win! =O

Ohhh You are back! (I want more Jaemin from you!) ♥

amouralamer November 1 2008, 05:46:50 UTC

*smiles* Thanks! My chaptered fic and RL have really taken it out of me! I'm just now starting to want to write again!

(And I love it when people quote the parts they liked!^^)

Thanks again!

realitywaiting November 1 2008, 05:46:38 UTC

I KNEW I HEARD THAT BLOODY SONG ELSEWHERES...umm >.> Hi? XD okay I really liked that! beautifully written! everytime I hear her name or any of her songs...I am reminded of my mother XD!

amouralamer November 1 2008, 05:48:48 UTC

XD Thanks!

Your Mum huh? Why? :)

realitywaiting November 1 2008, 07:54:13 UTC

mum listened to her when I was younger

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amouralamer November 1 2008, 17:26:47 UTC

Jaejoong is crying because he knows that Min is about to break up with him.

Thanks!♥

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amouralamer November 2 2008, 03:00:37 UTC

*handsyouatissueandpatsyouontheback* It's okay! It had a happy ending!

Min finally saw how much Jaejoong loved him and that Jaejoong was asking him not to give up on them. That they could make it and be happy together.

See! *pointsabove* happy ending!

kurogoma November 1 2008, 07:03:36 UTC

His face is completely open for the first time and through his tears you can finally read what he is thinking.

You stare into his eyes for what feels like an eternity. Then pulling on his hand you wrap him in a tight embrace.
Smiling, you whisper, "Okay."

jaejoong can read changmin. that does count for something doesn`t it? :D

and even though they waited till it was almost too late...i am glad they decided to take the leap and just fall (in love)

i ♥ your jaemin. look forward to more!

amouralamer November 1 2008, 17:32:19 UTC

Thanks so much! ^^

I was afraid what I wrote was a little too vague and no one would understand what I meant by it.
I know I'm going to wish I'd waited and tweaked stuff before posting. I'm neurotic like that and I can already feel alternate words starting to swim up from the back of my head. I try to ignore them. :)