Comments | amoury: An attempt at "The-GIRL-Who-Lived", challenge brought forth in deleterius...

amoury

An attempt at "The-GIRL-Who-Lived", challenge brought forth in deleterius...

Jun 06, 2005 11:56

Starts more by movieverse than bookverse; BV would basically be restating everything while inserting the words "She, her, Rose" instead of "He, his, Harry". I wanted to start with Dumbledore and all, but that again seemed redundant. It starts with Rose at "home" with the Dursleys, nearing her 11th birthday.

( *Beats Mary-Sues* BACK OFF, IT'S MINE AND IT'S GOOD!! )

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dracobolt June 6 2005, 19:23:51 UTC

Came here from Deleterius to see what you'd written for the challenge. I like what you've written so far. If you are going to continue to post parts of this on your journal, would you mind if I friended you?

amoury June 6 2005, 19:29:58 UTC

Sure, go on ahead! I'll do the same...
Wow. My list is growing here... am I popular or what? Whoo-hoo!

korepersephone June 6 2005, 19:43:30 UTC

Here from deleterius.

This is a great start, I'm looking forward to reading more. Is it okay if I friend you?

amoury June 6 2005, 21:16:23 UTC

O' course! I like friends. Hee. :)

qwentoozla June 7 2005, 02:27:32 UTC

Ooh, very, very good! I would say more but I have to go now.

Mind if I friend you?

amoury June 7 2005, 12:16:19 UTC

Sure! Lotsa friending going on, cool...:)

alisquid June 7 2005, 04:58:14 UTC

Really quite good. The Sue is really "the girl who lived"- a female Harry. Not all angst goth, not all OMGTEHOPPERSION!!!11one!!!elven, but really Harry Potter.

I'm eagar to see more.