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Klein Liebe (4/7)

Mar 19, 2010 20:45

Title: Kleine Liebe - Chapter 4
Word Count: 3,500
Rating: T for language
Characters: Prussia, Canada, Russia
Summery: Thursday comes with a hockey game and a rather unwanted visitor. But Gilbert made a promise, so he'll have to deal with the russian bastard for now.

( And we encounter a problem... )

c: prussia, fanfic, c: russia, p: prucan, c: canada

Comments 11

kaliona March 20 2010, 03:30:58 UTC

OK, adding Russia to this fic just made it TEN TIMES MORE AWESOME. Russia just brings out the WORST in Gilbert and it's great to read about, and I loooove how you write Gilbert when he's interacting with Ivan. In fact, I love how you write Gilbert in this fic to begin with. It's this big emotional conflict, and you are AMAZING when you get into that emotional zone, I've noticed. I'm gonna need more of this fic in about two seconds.

Oh, and while we're on the subjects of fics in general, I'm thinking about writing a little AU, slice-of-life sort of PruCan fic, and I'm looking for a beta to send the first chapter to when I finish A few chapters of my Franada fic. c': Would you be kind enough to maybe... review it for me, when I write it?

amser_te March 20 2010, 03:39:18 UTC

Uwah~ Thank you! Thank you~!
-tears up and wibbles a bit-
I always love reading your comments/reviews.

Be a beta? For you~?
OHYESBBY
XD
Sure, I don't mind. c: I'm not that big on Franada, but I'm sure I can suck it up and deal with it. ;) I'm not sure if I'll be the best of beta's for yah, but I'll give it a shot. c:

amser_te March 20 2010, 03:40:14 UTC

also...I may or may not be posting the next chapter tonight...

-shifty eyes-

kaliona March 20 2010, 03:51:55 UTC

... *fondles you out of love* C':|

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orangepencils March 20 2010, 04:03:51 UTC

i fell off my chair when i saw this was updated.

THIS IS SO AMAZING. and omg the way you write them all is amazing. it's jsut so great and the emotional depth and conflict is soooo rich. And the end with Russia, goodness, that was wow. like, words fail me.

I CANT WAIT FOR MORE <3 YOU ARE AMAZING! *worships*

amser_te March 20 2010, 04:05:10 UTC

FFFFFFFFFFF
I DON'T DESERVE SUCH LOVE

I mean really, this is probably one of my least favourite chapters of the thing. XD

BUT THANK YOU ANYWAYS~
-showers you with maple cookies and pancakes-

orangepencils March 20 2010, 04:07:14 UTC

anyone who can turn canada into a kid, have prussia become an emotional mess, have russia being creepy and getting into gilbo's head and having france's words be recurring to prussia DESERVES LOVE oh and having arthur completely mess up his spell as well.

YOU ARE MUCH WELCOME!
-takes cookies and pancakes-