Comments | amused4ever: BrigitsFlame, June

amused4ever

BrigitsFlame, June - Week 1

Jun 07, 2009 02:46

( He stands in front of the dilapidated ranch... )

brigitsflame, original fic

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amused4ever June 9 2009, 20:04:26 UTC

Thanks! I actually get that a lot regarding the "detail" in my writing, haha. :D

roar bluebirds_sing June 9 2009, 14:59:13 UTC

Hi there! I’m your Roar Reader this week.
Wow, your story is a truthful exploration of the landscape of the mind whenAlzheimer is there. It captures that blurred serenity perfectly. And, well I’m not mother tongue so it’s difficult for me to say, but I think that your writing is excellent. I particularly enjoyed the passage starting with * He would give her a laugh as he walked up,…* It reminds me of Joyce’s stream of consciousness. DDD
Thank you very much for an awesome and thought provoking reading. :)
Tina

Re: roar amused4ever June 9 2009, 20:08:06 UTC

You mean English isn't your native language? Wow, I wouldn't have known! ^_^ Thanks for reading! And that passage you enjoyed is actually my favorite, so I'm glad you liked it. The stream-of-conscious feel is what I was going for. :D

Re: roar bluebirds_sing June 12 2009, 08:10:36 UTC

Sorry, it took me a while to answer (RL has been crazy). Yes, I’m Italian and have to say that not to be mother tongue sucks DDD I’d love playing more often in the monthly contest, but I need an extra amount of spare time to write down a piece *arrgghhh* Well, luckily, reading good entries like yours and giving my little roar contribution is satisfying enough. :-)
Ciao!
Tina