BrigitsFlame, June - Week 2

[amused4ever]

 

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[ephemeralbreath]

-goes to look it up on youtube- I've never heard of this trick!

... your brilliant logic and sense of justice fails to disappoint me.
That sounds like something you would say. Hahah.

Way to procrastinate! ;P -still hasn't even started-

[ephemeralbreath]

OKAY OKAY NOW THAT I'VE READ IT PROPERLY AND LOOKED UP THE TRICK AND EVERYTHING!

WHY DO YOU ALWAYS WRITE SUCH SAD STUFFFF?! I so sad now. D:

-is also wondering if I should be worried about you-

[amused4ever]

DAMNIT WHAT I THOUGHT THIS ONE WAS DECENTLY HAPPY--

T__T;

-is wondering if I should be worried about me, too-

[ephemeralbreath]

I mean, it was happy, but dramatic history, much?!

D:

-hugs hugs hugs- Also, Keyur and I are probably going to hang out sometime next week or the the week after so yeah.

[amused4ever]

Thanks. :D

[lacombe]

:-) I like how this story builds- it's extremely lighthearted at the beginning, with a fantastic little piece of foreshadowing with the dead frog- something deeper is on the way, I knew, from the first moment. The revelation makes you see both the future events and the ones already covered in the story in a whole new light and turns something fun into something strong, complicated, and worthwhile. Nicely done!

[amused4ever]

Thank you! I'm glad you read into the dead frog, I wasn't sure whether it really fit properly into what I was trying to do with the story. Thanks for reading. :)

[lacombe]

It fit wonderfully. :-) Thanks for the fantastic read!