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amusedinred

Just Desserts (One Shot)

Jun 23, 2012 02:11

Title: Just Desserts
Author: amusedinred
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3679
Feedback: Would be amazing. :)
Summary: Dom and Matt get creative with some ice cream before deciding to get 'clean' again.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse, even though it would be a lot of fun if I did. Not making any money and this is fiction.

Author's Note: I had Uni ( Read more... )

au, one shot, belldom, slash, just desserts

Comments 14

waltzingstar June 22 2012, 19:12:04 UTC

b'awwwwwwww you know how much I love this! Imagery is GORGEOUS

Shadows really did make interesting shapes if you looked at them long enough, much like clouds became butterflies, or rabbits, or a man, or two men fucking - it was all dependent on the angle really.

Descriptions were so lovelyyy, and the dialogue was dorky AND hot.

Basically, my face the whole time reading tihs

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amusedinred June 23 2012, 02:41:11 UTC

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engel_sehnsucht June 22 2012, 20:21:32 UTC

Awwww, I loved this! Hot and sweet.

amusedinred June 23 2012, 02:42:53 UTC

Thank you so much, Anita :D Glad you liked it <3

darthtofu June 23 2012, 00:51:49 UTC

This is so good!!! Vivid, wonderful imagery but not stifling, and so cute and hot and thoughtful and…this:

"The secret to a good pancake mix is a nice, firm grip," Matt said, sliding his hand along the handle to illustrate his point.

The throat noise became more of a choking sound as a wide-eyed Dom asked, "Really?"

"Nope," Matt giggled. "Pancakes aren't that hard. Well, er, you know what I mean. They taste pretty good with ice cream."

"A lot of things taste good with ice cream," Dom said before he could stop himself, a heat rising to his cheeks.

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL *died from lack of oxygen*

amusedinred June 23 2012, 02:43:37 UTC

Eeeeee thanks, Al :D So happy you read it and that you liked it :D :D :D <3

easilyerased June 23 2012, 05:46:44 UTC

OhMyGod Dom had better call him. Matt is just so adorable I can't even.

Gorgeous. And your writing is absolutely flawless and so descriptive and I just want to snuggle with those two and ah. <3

amusedinred June 23 2012, 07:27:02 UTC

Such a lovely comment :') Thanks, girl! So happy you liked it.

Snuggling with those two would be amazing ;)

<3

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amusedinred June 25 2012, 03:05:37 UTC

Aww, thanks, Em. I'm so happy you read it and liked it. It gives writing a purpose.

I <3 you too <33