Undisclosed Letters

[amusedinred]

Title: Undisclosed Letters
Author: amusedinred
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4145
Feedback: Would be amazing. :)
Summary: He'd put all of himself into it. He'd given everything he had. She took everything from him and now he had nothing left.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse, even though it would be a lot of fun if I did. Not making any money and this is

Comments

[somatic_mind]

Oh, wow! Very nicely done, I loved it. You needn't have been worried about posting this!

The beginning tugged on my heartstrings a bit; very emotional.

Some of the many lines I loved:

He'd put all of himself into it. He'd given everything he had. She took everything from him and now he had nothing left.

Dominic's wet tongue filling his mouth and dancing along the roof of it.

Silence closing in around him. A reminder of how hopelessly alone he was. Not even a pounding heart beat loud enough to be of any comfort.

I also liked the way you progressed from emotional to cute to scorching hot sexytimes.

Well done, I hope you keep writing! *hugs* <3

[amusedinred]

Thank you so much! :) Really happy you liked it.

Already have an idea for another one. :)

*hugs*

<333

[easilyglorious]

Well done!!!! I really, really liked the story!

Sneaky Dom was sneaky, but it was mutually beneficial to both of them, so who am I to complain???

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[amusedinred]

Cheers for reading. So glad you liked it. :)

<333

[themusclemuseum]

I don't know why you were so nervous cause this was uh-maz-ing! Is it bad that I imagined Kate as Matt's girlfriend? Ah well... :D Can't wait for more Jess! <3

[amusedinred]

Thanks Casey. Happy you liked it. :)

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[sheerpoetry]

Oh, I love this! It's hot, but there's cute and sweet, too.

And Dom. Dom will always be my Drummer Boy. ;)

This was great! And welcome! :D

[amusedinred]

I'm so glad you liked it.

Thank you! :D

<3

[motivatedmonkey]

Holy hell o__o Jess you are amazing doll!

[amusedinred]

Thank you. :D :D :D

So glad you enjoyed it.

<3