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Dreams Do Come True - of Wine & Roses - Part 2

Dec 09, 2013 07:56

Dreams Do Come True - of Wine & Roses - Part 2

Disclaimers, etc. are at the beginning of the story - see Part 1 http://amy-0127.livejournal.com/12779.html

( If you're happy and you know it, form a mob! )

character:jethro gibbs, by amy_0127, character:tony dinozzo, 2013/day 09, genre:romance, media:fanfiction, rating:nc-17

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amy_0127 December 9 2013, 23:31:25 UTC

Thank you so much! And I really appreciate your help too. :)

I'm really glad you liked the original characters - I never really used any before this, so knowing they were well received makes me happy.

Being able to evoke an emotional response makes this monstrosity worthwhile. :)

You don't know how upset I was when OSU lost this past Saturday! They were playing into my fic so well until then! LOL (I'm a Mountaineer by birth) But yes, let's just pretend they did! ;)

*bows* Thanks again!

ferneberga December 9 2013, 16:12:01 UTC

Wow!! Hot!! Mind's too melted to write anything with a modicum of sense right now.

amy_0127 December 9 2013, 23:33:37 UTC

LOL! Yes! Mind melting goal achieved! Thank you! :D

ncisvu_lj December 9 2013, 18:54:47 UTC

This had me laughing and tearing up and 'awwing' the whole time I was reading it! That was the best vacation and who knew Gibbs was such a romantic?! I absolutely loved all the emotion in this, the proposal was unique and *so* romantic and the lovemaking was hot. You could really feel their love throughout the whole thing. Brilliant!

amy_0127 December 9 2013, 23:45:26 UTC

Fantastic - thank you! I love knowing I made you feel the emotions - that's a huge compliment!

All blame should fall on my daughter who came over one day and made me watch flash mob wedding proposals on YouTube all that afternoon. LOL But it served me well in this instance.

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. :)

katupnorth December 10 2013, 03:25:38 UTC

Aww!! hat was so sweet. OOC Gibbs, maybe, but we all know he's got a sweet side under there ;) The scene on the plane was HOT!! read that one a few times just to make sure I fully *ahem* appreciated it. Nice excuse for some Schmoopy Pr0n!

amy_0127 December 11 2013, 02:51:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm so flattered you read this and commented!

Gibbs was OOC, but he did manage to get 4 women to marry him, so there has to be something else that attracted them other than the eyes, the smile. the ass...wait - where was I?

There were too many opportunities for the Pr0n in this one. Maggie kept complaining that her muse wasn't letting them get it on, I was complaining that mine had them going at it like bunnies. Too funny!

Thanks for the review, my dear! I appreciate your support. :)

sexycazzy December 10 2013, 09:43:42 UTC

AWWWW! so sweeet! :D

amy_0127 December 11 2013, 02:54:23 UTC

Probably should have come with a diabetic warning, huh? I don't write out and out sweet that often but I figured why not? It's the holidays.

I appreciate you reading it and commenting! :)