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amyluluv

At the Bottom of Dante's Inferno - Foreword

Jul 31, 2009 18:20

Title: At the Bottom of Dante's Inferno
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17
Genre: Angst, Fluff, Smut, Romance
Length: Chaptered
Summary: In between business and errands, a secretive affair between Jaejoong and Yunho blooms, a relationship with a married man, that is. Yunho was married to Yoona, the person who made him the wealthy man he is today, but what if ( Read more... )

at the bottom of dante's inferno

Comments 4

yomi_chan305 August 1 2009, 00:37:02 UTC

I'm liking it a lot so far! =D I really don't have any suggestions as to a different character than Yoona... she seems ok to me. O: But maybe you could explore some other options.

nimtsu12 August 1 2009, 02:13:21 UTC

just passing by, and saw ur fic foreword.
Nice one! *smile with angelic face*
update soon......

*start to imagine*...lol

octocoffee August 1 2009, 04:21:14 UTC

Hi! Found this through the Hug comm, and I thought I'd add some of my input ( ... )

amyluluv August 1 2009, 04:49:55 UTC

Thank you for your inputs, I really appreciate your comment. I agree with your points. Actually, I was thinking of putitng the character profiles as part of the story, but I'll be sure to leave them out since they really are giving out too much.

I do plan to include cute mannerisms (some according to real life) for the characters. For Yoona, I also did plan to start out her character as being kind and tolerating but slowly she starts to feel hatred for her husband's betrayal. Although her image is literally burning in my head.. cuz her smile.. DAMN.. that freakin smie LOL. But yes, now that I think of it, I'd rather stick to Yoona rather than Boa.

Please do continue to give inputs, there is always room for me to improve!