Running Commenatry on Twilight, Chapter 17 part 1

[amyrat151]

I bridled a little at the word child. "Jacob is not that much younger than I am," I reminded him.

He looked at me then, his anger abruptly fading. "Oh, I know," he assured me with a grin. ::headdesk:: Isn’t great everyone that Edward respects Bella as much as a five-year-old girl?

I sighed and put my hand on the door handle.

"Get

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[amyrat151]

Love the icon

[shannon_zhang]

I forgot how awful Bella was to Billy. Makes me want to slap her. But the grammar stuff is great. Lovely snark. XP

[eltiteretista]

I loving this so far :D

though it's a bit creepy, becuase it's like you're reading MY mind when I read the thing

umm....I'm not sure if you can change this, but in the title it says "commentry" instead of "commentAry"

sorry, but I'm a grammar Nazi by trade xD;

[amyrat151]

Yeah, sure, I just can't spell.