Running Commenatry on Twilight, Chapter 17 part 2

[amyrat151]

He fought back a smile. Then he bent his head down and touched his cold lips softly to the hollow at the base of my throat.

"Are you still worried now?" he murmured against my skin.

"Yes." I struggled to concentrate. "About hitting trees and getting sick." I feel sick, where’s a gin and tonic?

His nose drew a line up the skin of my

Comments

[foxie_trot]

God, he whines more than Shinji Ikari, and has a far less reason to wangst than that emo bitch did

BWAHA! SO TRUE! Oh, win for the random Evangelion reference. :D

OME lololol, this commentary makes me giggle so much. Thank you for posting this, I am so glad I am reading it. XD

[amyrat151]

I'm glad you are, too. And if you have a wangsty character, referencing Eva is easy.