At a magnificent mahogany desk under a tremendous skylight, an important, harried-looking man is staring at a small screen is his hands, stabbing at it frantically with his fingers. Other than his tortured expression, he appears oblivious to the noisy, angry crowds surrounding him. People are shouting, waving papers, banging their fists on the desk
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That's interesting. That's very interesting. I love your character development in this thing, for both of them.
Last couple of paragraphs: brilliant! *adores the Master*
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The character stuff - I hope it's reading the way I wanted it to. I don't think it's realistic if these two get all fluffy, but just constant hate and hurting ... that's not character development. I wanted them to reach a sort of detente, an understanding or agreement of sorts, without stepping massively out of character. If I've done it right, that's how it'll read.
Anyway, glad you liked it. Just one more chapter to go!am
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I don't believe there's NO way these two can co-exist. I wanted to work out how that might happen. I don't want to go into fluff territory, but I'm allergic to tragic endings, so now I have to work out how to write a happy ending while staying in character!
Glad you like.
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