The World's a Beast of a Burden - Chapter 1/3 - You've Been Holding Up a Long Time

Nov 17, 2013 07:57

Sam/Dean
Established relationship
NC-17
~3700 words

On Ao3

Sometimes Dean gets tired and cranky and scared. And sometimes it takes Sam a while to notice.Sam knows that every now and then Dean starts to feel antsy, like he’s waiting for the other shoe to drop. Like he’s waiting for Sam to come to his senses and leave. And, like the emotionally ( Read more... )

wincest, nc-17, established relationship, season 9

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runedgirl November 17 2013, 04:36:22 UTC
An intriguing start - really enjoying Sam's view of Dean, and how hard he works to 'get it right' rings very real. Looking forward to more!

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roxymissrose November 17 2013, 05:19:48 UTC
Very interested in this--I'm looking forward to seeing how Sam will manage to get past those walls Dean is so good at throwing up.

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paperbackwriter November 17 2013, 08:43:02 UTC
So happy to see you post and that it said Chapter 1 at the beginning : )

Loved the pacing of this, the build up was lovely and the hotness was very hot : )
I really liked the way you've written Sam, the care and longing but with the reasoning behind what he's doing that could so easily come off as manipulation but really doesn't.

Looking forward to Chapter 2!
Thank you! x

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aerynsun5 November 30 2013, 18:03:20 UTC
Very nice! I'm glad Sam woke up and realized what was going on. And I hope they're as lucky in Vegas as my mom always is. ;D

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