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anaile20gh June 22 2013, 20:19:20 UTC
Steven wishes he could stop grinning, he really does. It’s just not that easy.

I CAN'T STOP GRINNING EITHER...THIS IS TOO FUCKING PERFECTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!
What are you talking about it??? THIS ENDING IS JUST SO PERFECT....

“Can we fuck first? I promise I’ll buy you lunch later,” Oh he would...this Xabi would...GOD!!!!!

“None of this makes any sense, does it? I’d really like someone to explain to me how it’s possible to spend a week with a man who shot me, kidnapped me…” Steven braces himself with a ready line about the waterfall, but Xabi has no intention of ever complaining about that part again. “…more than half a year ago and not be able to stop thinking about him every single day?” jkdfkldjflajflajflsjflakjsflkasjflkajflakjflkjflkafjlkadjflkajflkdjflksdjflkdjfalkjlkdjfkhgklsjsj...I love this!!

“Are you going to introduce me to Double Oh Sexy or what?” I love her, whoever she is!!!

“I can work with that. Plus, you’re still a Royal Marine, right? You probably got to keep the dress uniform when you retired ( ... )

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an_only_tree June 23 2013, 01:16:25 UTC
you officially wrote "something that nobody has written before"

Mission accomplished! You're welcome to give me random prompts any time, by the way...


... )

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anaile20gh June 23 2013, 01:42:57 UTC
Not water...Gatorade!!!

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an_only_tree June 23 2013, 01:36:25 UTC
PS: the picture in your icon was quite inspiring.

I find lots of extremely random things inspiring so that's hardly surprising...

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loozy June 22 2013, 22:28:53 UTC
I'll come back later when I am more coherent and not just fhruifrhfnczromfgmzpf 4pgrpmfiüxf,gr87p ghü489fh3rü9 comes out of my typing... :D

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an_only_tree June 23 2013, 00:56:14 UTC
*waits* *is excited*

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unmomentoxfavor June 22 2013, 23:23:53 UTC
omg dead dead dead!!! what a finale!!! "He’s contemplating ripping off the light cast on his arm and beating himself senseless with it" lol! poor stevie! and I was getting sad like 'omg no!, Xabs can't do that to stevie! Why is Quique there and then... “Steven, I… I don’t love him.”... “That’s too bad for him,”...“I’ll mail you some guaro" ... brb

... )

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an_only_tree June 23 2013, 00:55:47 UTC
Gracias a ti! For all your encouragement and feedback. :-* It really means a lot to me that you've enjoyed it so much because I know just from reading the Intro this seemed... complicated, so it feels like I've achieved something by turning those expectations around. Colombia really IS my dream destination so I'm glad I didn't fuck this up, basically.

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an_only_tree June 23 2013, 02:33:13 UTC
Oh and the next one is already in the planning stages... I have to hurry up and write it though because I have a very specific deadline for it.

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gerlonso June 23 2013, 07:20:24 UTC
Omggggg I think my heart just exploded from how perfect everything was. For a minute I got seriously sad at the beginning of this chapter lol

And it's over!!!! :(:(:(:( I hate coming to the ends of fics I love.

You will write more gerlonso stories, YES?

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an_only_tree June 23 2013, 08:48:56 UTC
I never really plan to write anything, it all depends on how inspiration strikes etc. This time it just so happens that inspiration struck already, one of the reasons it took me a while to wrap up this story, I've been distracted by the next. :)

Thank you as always for all your support and your feedback!

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elisa88 July 11 2013, 03:06:04 UTC
This was all kinds of AWESOME! even more awesome considering I'm from Colombia XD May I ask why you wrote it in this country??

I love Xabi, not being the typical damsel in distress but a very very strong character, and so smart and sexy and whatnot.. OOOH, and Double Oh Sexy, most definitely. Sexiest man alive! Oh! Oh! And Stevie wearing his royal marine uniform? DAMN. HOT. *drools*

I loved it, really. Everything was exciting and funny.. it was great! <3

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an_only_tree July 13 2013, 22:30:09 UTC
Thank you, it's awesome that you read it all in one go, thank you for your comment.

May I ask why you wrote it in this country??

It was a mixture of useful technicalities and sentimentality because Colombia is my no. 1 dream travel destination. :) I started with a vague idea that Xabi would get kidnapped for some unspecified industrial espionage reason... It needed to be a Spanish-speaking country because 1. my Spanish is much better than my French for both research and dialogue and 2. Liverpool have a lot more ex-Spanish speaking players that could make fun cameos. So once I decided I need an oil-rich Spanish-speaking country, the choice was easy.

not being the typical damsel in distress but a very very strong character, and so smart and sexy and whatnotHahahaha, thank you. I don't do damsel in distress, regardless of gender. In fact, out of the two of them, Xabi's the dangerous, slightly psychopathic one. I'd be a little worried about Stevie's safety, but as long as he puts out regularly and wears the uniform every now and then ( ... )

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elisa88 July 20 2013, 14:02:37 UTC
really? dream travel destination? may I ask why? If you ever need any help with getting here, please do let me know. I'd love to help you fulfill your dream. I don't live in the capital (although my city is gorgeous, i'd even say better than Bogotá! haha) but I can always lend a hand ;)

Oh yeah, Xabs is a very dangerous damsel. But I love him like that, all full of opinions.. and I didn't mention his boyfriend Quique but, el-oh-el. With his stupid herbal tea, not appreciating how AWESOME Xabier is... hmph!

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elisa88 July 20 2013, 14:03:23 UTC
really? dream travel destination? may I ask why? If you ever need any help with getting here, please do let me know. I'd love to help you fulfill your dream. I don't live in the capital (although my city is gorgeous, i'd even say better than Bogotá! haha) but I can always lend a hand ;)

Oh yeah, Xabs is a very dangerous damsel. But I love him like that, all full of opinions.. and I didn't mention his boyfriend Quique but, el-oh-el. With his stupid herbal tea, not appreciating how AWESOME Xabier is... hmph!

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