Football AU: Now That I Am in Madrid and Can Think 7/22

[an_only_tree]

Struan Marshall really is Stevie's agent. The rest... well... you know.

Comments

[papper_docka]

New chapter! OMG, this makes me so excited, like a new episode of my show! :) I really like Jake, with his juvenille cockiness and naivety, his hinted diva-attitude and mommy/daddy issues. He's very well fleshed out, but I didn't expect anything less from you. :) He's also lucky that in 2018 it's obviously okay to be gay and he doesn't have any hang-ups because of that. I'm really curious to see what's his role gonna be in the story, I'm guessing somebody's going to play a father-figure for him, huh? Although I can't tell which one that's gonna be. And I really like all SRS BZNS Xabi, strict and taciturn and impeccable. RAWWWRRR! ;) That part about the green insect was awesome! :)

[an_only_tree]

It's the low carb diet, he's a huuuuungry, cranky beyotch. If only dieting were this sexy for everyone...

I think I've figured out what Jake's doing in my story and yeah... mostly about the daddy issues. ;)

[falange84]

I love this! The best thing I've read in forever. I want an update every day, but... no pressure! Your oc is most believable. The 7/22 makes me very excited!

[an_only_tree]

I hope you're not bored before I even get to 20. :) I wish I could write/edit/research/finish a new chapter every day, I've got awesome readers so you guys are very motivating.

[anaile20gh]

7/22...HELL YEAH!! This one was my fav part of this update...hahaha...just kidding...I LOVE YOUR UPDATES!!

"I don't keep bread in the apartment." ♥♥♥♥♥♥

[an_only_tree]

Wait till you get to Chapter 17 and you're like "Booooring..." Kidding, it's so cool to see you so enthusiastic about my little story. :)

I'm slimming down Fat!Xabi so he's kind of cranky because of the low carb diet.

[charliechaz]

Never walk by myself......lol!

[an_only_tree]

It's going to be stuck in my head every time I hear YNWA from now on. :D

[dld_ftw]

Loving this! Can't wait for more.

[an_only_tree]

Thank you! New chapter's up, still working on editing some of the upcoming ones...