Paradise lost

[anael777]

title: Paradise lost
author: anael777
pairing: yunjae
genre: romance, angst?
rating: pg-13
warning: incest, father-son relationship, un-betaed >_<'
summary: When, after paying the highest price his feelings Yunho once again stands as a free man, he notices how much everything has changed. Was it all worth it or did he make a fatal mistake?

Comments

[captainmarvel]

This was great!

Poor Yunho, I sometimes ask myself how I would react to a situation like this in real life?
I'm happy they were reunited.

Thank You ♥

[anael777]

thank you honey!
yes sometimes things we see are different to what the are. sometimes it's not a sodomy or rape sometimes it's real love...
ok I'm getting of topic ^^

thank you for reading!! ^^

o_O!

[castrjen18]

*faints* (after 5 minutes)....Jesu-..I mean Jeez! Don't even want to think about something like that occurring in real life but since is yunjae...it's acceptable * bricks self for been a pervert*. Anyway...I felt it! I tend to read fanfics like everyday and the only emotion I get most of the time is amusement and something else ;-) (specially if it's smut). But this particular one-shot just...made me feel human. My friends tend to tell me I'm a preachy cold hearted bitch (one of them told me that last night over the phone) but I think I felt moved by this fic. Gosh really enjoyed it, thanks!

P.S: OMG YOU WRITE SO WELL, CONGRATULATIONS!

Re: o_O!

[anael777]

oh my! wow... I mean thank you.. I don't know what to say... your comment is more than I could ever with for!
as you I read fics daily and I know the feeling of numbness you get from them ^^'
thank you thank you thank you!!
I'm happy you decided to read this!
thank you ever so much

[k_yunhopop]

I haven't read yet but I have to comment: I was clapping alone in my room coz the 1st lines are amazing! I was almost tearing for someone who's I thought was the victim, and then I figured out that he's the monster. Amazing intro that deserve a whole comment ^^
off to read what's going next

[anael777]

ahh well I hope you will like the rest as well unnie ^^

*hugs*

[k_yunhopop]

I read it yesterday laid in my bed.
First, I tought that Yunho was gonna commit suicide. Then death sentence, but God thanks it's not, I hate it :/
But I wasn't expecting such an ending! That's really sad because this love is wrong, forbidden as Hell (or in this case Heaven). Jae doesn't realize his the victim and Yunho is such a bastard for taking him back.
You know what I like in your fic? Actually, it's so close to reality. So close that I don't want them to be together again.
If I wasn't fan of your art, I would tell you to write more! XD

[anael777]

wow was I able to put so much confision into the fic ^^' wow ^^' hehe i didn't think it could become this surprising ^^

well as I said to some other person my belief is that true and real love is never wrong what we choose to do in the name of that love might be wrong ^^'

thank you for your honest words I apreciate them so much! I'm glad I could evoke such emotions in you *^^*

hehe don't worry writing proves to be way too hard ^^' I prefer drawing anyway hehe ^^

thank you again unnie!!
*hugs*

[anael777]

that was the whole point ^^ Yunho felt the same - sometimes what we s isn't what it really is. that's what Yun experienced but I don't blame him I would feel the same. thank god Jae didn't change his heart ^^

I'm the same XD I love YunJae incest fics ^^'
it's the yunjae factor I'd say the are just perfect no matter what thy do or who they are^^

thank you for reading!!!

[rjein]

this is so great! i love how everything was delivered with such emotions in it. ^^

[anael777]

thank you *wink*
I'm really glad you liked it ^^
*hugs you ever so much*