Paradise lost

[anael777]

title: Paradise lost
author: anael777
pairing: yunjae
genre: romance, angst?
rating: pg-13
warning: incest, father-son relationship, un-betaed >_<'
summary: When, after paying the highest price his feelings Yunho once again stands as a free man, he notices how much everything has changed. Was it all worth it or did he make a fatal mistake?

Comments

[museelo]

OMG I don't know if I'll read this fic ;_;
I want to, 'cause I want to read your work but... I'm really really not an incest fan ;____;

Sorry DDD':

[anael777]

aw bb it's ok ^^
you don't have to XD

*hugs*

[howlsgirl]

Me speak!!!

Me speaking later than I intended and I'm sorry for my lateness!!!!

Oh. My. Dear. So it took me a bit to understand that Yunnie was in jail. And I don't know what you did here, cuz you really didn't explain the jail cell or anything like that-but OH MY. Okay-okay. Somewhere in your descriptions of Yunho's loneliness, I could F-e-e-l the coldness surrounding him. I saw him sitting there, alone. ANd when you described him holding this worn-out newspaper, just staring at it cuz it was the only way he could see Jae-*SNIFF*

I remember you told me you weren't as proud of this work as you'd like to be. PLEASE. The abject sting Yunho bears up under-soooooooooo lovely!!!!! Oh my dear! Your writing just cuts me down every time!!!!

*HUGS U*

[anael777]

why haven't I replied earlier? I don't know O.o I honestly have no idea T^T I'm so sorry to make you wait!!

thank you my dearest thank you! it took me more than it should to get this done and then gather the courage to actually post it >///< so thank you for taking your precious time reading this!

[moon1084]

This was a great read baby. I usually don't read direct incest but I read it cuz you wrote it.

[anael777]

oh my O.O um... thank you ever so much wow I feel so honoured m(_ _)m thank you

*hugs you*

this means so much to me T^T

[yunjae2009]

I liked this very much. I too love YunJae incest and i agree with you on believing that sometimes its real love.

[anael777]

thank you! I'm in utter love with incest!YunJae ^^' I can't help it XD
I wanted to play with the idea of actual love not only lust and pervy thoughts but actual love and I'm glad it worked out ^^
thank you!

[delias_miso]

I LOVE THIS.

[anael777]

thank you >////