^____________^ yay! This is definitely one of my more..idk. Coherent, finished, sort of attempts, I was conscious of the way the lines were set up and..not quite metered, but, how long they were and if they fit. It was definitely describing a particular night, but until I re-read it I wasn't sure how good it sounded on its own.. it does alright. :) The first few stanzas more than the ones following, but I'm still fairly happy with this one overall.
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This is definitely one of my more..idk. Coherent, finished, sort of attempts, I was conscious of the way the lines were set up and..not quite metered, but, how long they were and if they fit. It was definitely describing a particular night, but until I re-read it I wasn't sure how good it sounded on its own.. it does alright. :) The first few stanzas more than the ones following, but I'm still fairly happy with this one overall.
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