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Jan 23, 2005 02:06

uneasy atmosphere in
  the grayness of reluctant memory
a melancholy song
  cloaks these dark-ringed eyes
sullen bleakness
  of rain that will not come

walls unreal
  scenery unseen
a forlorn cry
  echoing from steel
wings clipped
  this cage needs no bars

windows into nothing
  eyes unmet

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themegs January 23 2005, 17:51:32 UTC
I like this one, especially the last two lines.

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ananda_daydream January 23 2005, 18:58:46 UTC
*nods, smiles warmly* I like those lines as well.. those, and "scenery unseen". :) Not sure when/where this one was written..probably in class, by the sounds of it though. *giggles*

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