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[ananda_daydream]

the rose-gold pallor
lent these darkening streets
      artificial means
      to keep at bay natural failings
alone and unknown
eyes which see and are not seen
      heart unfettered
      and aching from its lack of chains

again surrounded
   and still scared and alone

Comments

[themegs]

Yay! Your little star is feeling loving! *snuggles* I love you.

You're brilliant. :) "Rose-gold" is an unexpected and perfect description. I can imagine it very clearly. *g*

heart unfettered
and aching from its lack of chains

*glomps to pieces*

[ananda_daydream]

*snuggles* I love you! ^_^

*grins and blushes, huuuuuuuuuuugs* Thanks darlin'... I really do like "rose-gold", that's just the name that comes to mind with the colour..like, the lights around campus? that's about the colour they are. *smiles* A warm gold, but tinged with rose..especially in this one place, where the light hits the wall of Jewett Hall at night, near the walkway from the library to the WilliC..I think that's where I coined the term. :)

*GLOMPS! back* ^____________^

[themegs]

It rmeinds me of our street lamps, too.

[themegs]

*reminds, hi, I'm an idiot.