Rocking. I especially liked the way that you wrote John as aware of the fact that the gulf of his love for Bobby might eventually turn on the both of them; nice, nice detail. Nice work overall.
Is he afraid, they ask? Isn’t it a little too late to ask that? John’s only answer is a smile. I like the ending. I like the way you portrayed his relationships with Jubilee, Piotr, and Tabby, though Jubilee was my favourite. Mother of All Light Shows, indeed. I can so see them doing that.
I'm a bit behind on the reading/feedback, but that was faboo, darling. Loved it. My god, you write John so perfectly and is it possible? Do you actually make me enjoy Bobby in some shape?
Re: ::squees::anchors_ashoreAugust 14 2003, 15:41:39 UTC
Thank you! I went through a period for a couple of days where I had feared I had lost my touch with John. It's great to hear that apparently I haven't.
And Bobby can be good...you just have to know how to bend him. ;)
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John’s only answer is a smile.
I like the ending. I like the way you portrayed his relationships with Jubilee, Piotr, and Tabby, though Jubilee was my favourite. Mother of All Light Shows, indeed. I can so see them doing that.
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I've really been getting into the idea of bringing in characters that have yet to be in the movies....blame evilweeble for that.
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Great work per usual!
**Mare
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And Bobby can be good...you just have to know how to bend him. ;)
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