Is it possible? Have I finally returned to full-time X2 writing?

[anchors_ashore]

Fic: The Forgotten Middle Children
Author: the_smooth_one
Rating: R.
Warnings: Violence. References to sex. Language.
Feedback: Always appreciated.
Pairing: Bobby/Rogue/John
Summary: He never told them how to rise above it.
Notes: Thank you to visbot for the encouragement and other shit. Muah!

Cross-posted in here, icemanroguepyro and dry_ice

Comments

[swear_jar]

Good one, I love Fight Club! =P Bobby crying and Rogue not... very I.C. (or so it seemed to me.)

[anchors_ashore]

Thank you! I'm a big fan of Fight Club myself.

And sorry, but I'm stupid. What does I.C. mean?

*feels dumb*

[swear_jar]

Don't feel dumb, it means 'in character'. ^_^;;;.

the first rule of fight club is

[0100111]

I honestly think this is the best X2 fic you've written. The story cohesion is better and the style is wow.

“Our souls are fading, each time we do this.”
That line doesn't feel cheesy. In fact, I downright like it. Kudos.

he could only watch them, in their glorious violence, try to destroy and rebuild each other through punches and kisses, kicks and touches, words like, “How does that feel, fucker?” and “Yes, please, more.”
Guh. *draws hearts around John/Rogue*

the bruise on Bobby’s chest that was threatening to fade away
Oooh, 'threatening.' Excellent word choice.

Fabulous stuff.

Re: the first rule of fight club is

[anchors_ashore]

Oh! Thank you so much! I wondered if the idea would work, but it was too alluring to ignore.

[sharpest_rose]

I realise this is an extremely overdue feedback, and I apologise for the delay... but may I have this for the archive?

[anchors_ashore]

Absolutely!

[dwellerofrhymes]

Now that was frigging wow. The whole fight club thing you have going on, wow!

touching the bruise on Bobby’s chest that was threatening to fade away thats just perfect! Wow ::wishes I could write like you::

[save_le_empire]

Although it holds a definate Fight Club feel {guh!}, this is still very original in dialogue and the actual feel is just fantastically (once again) intense.