Chullies L.O.V.E advices part 1

[anchovyxfishy]

Title: Chullies L.O.V.E advices
Rating: R
Pairing:Haehyuk, Slight! Hanchul,Slight! Kyumin
Summary; Donghae is pretty desperate right now. He noticed that Eunhyuk and Minho have a quiet nice relationship... what should he do now? Ask chulie for some advices?
Warning: Thats my first FF and not a CF ! ...My english is quiet bad ! GRAMMAR MISTAKES AND

Comments

[merinchi]

Hi ^__^
Mwahahaha in my opinion your fic was really great and funny!!
You're definitely talented if this was your first fic ^^
The way you write is really entertaining and I liked the whole story and oohh it's going to continue? Definitely gonna read more from you!

I actually expected worse than this, you're not that bad at writing english. I did spot many many little mistakes but nothing serious, they can be all easily fixed.

If you want i can become your beta ^_^ I haven't been anyone's beta for ages and I've been kind of looking for someone I could help! If you want you can send me your fics and I could fix the mistakes I find :)

[anchovyxfishy]

hi hi X333

oh realy *_* YAAY you like it X333
WTF ? do you mean it XDD? i think its not really well written ^^°
ahhh well than ...THANK YOU !!! X33 *hugs'n kisses X3*

oh O_O okay XD
WUUAH O_O REALLLLY !! OMMOOO THAT WOULD MBE GREAT *________________________*
AHH THANK YOU SOUW MUCH X3333~ i really need a beta X33~ so than X3 you'll be the first one who read my ff's XDDD
thank you again *_*

[merinchi]

Yes, this might not be like the best fic I've ever read,
but this is funny and easy-to-read, exciting and enjoyable! So yes I liked^^

I would love to be your beta~
I'll add you to my friends :)) next time you write, just send it to me first so I can check it before putting it to miracle ^_^

[anchovyxfishy]

hahah aww~ thank you :)))))

aww~ yaay D so thnn ....I HAVE A BETAAA YAAAY XD
hah aokai i will :d
thank youuu Q-Q....
but by the way...how shoul i call you :D?

[yuue04]

I DON'T THINK YOUR ENGLISH IS BAD!!!
STOP THINKING SO NEGATIVELY ABOUT YOUR WRITING!
I THINK YOU'RE JUST DOING GOOD, LIKE REAL GOOD KEKEKE
AND POSSESSIVE HAE HAS ALWAYS BEEN ONE OF MY FAVOURITE KEKEKE
AND I'M DYING TO READ IN DETAILS ABOUT WHAT IS HAPPENING BEHIND THE DOOR LOL
THANKS FOR SHARING!

[anchovyxfishy]

but isn't it ? Q-Q
fuu o-okai ;-;
thank you wuhhh >-<*hugs you tightly*
I really have a big lack of self-confident i think hahaha XD
mine too X3
*cough cough*well~ maybe you will be able to read it soon XD
thanks for reading *_*

[jasmin0304]

Wow, your first FF, woohoo :D I always like HeeChul's personality when you write!

You always make me happy with your writings and I'm so glad it's a second part ^^

[anchovyxfishy]

jup XD kinda XD
oh really *-*

glad to hear it than X33 i REALLY LOVE OUR DIVA CHUL ! XD

haha thank you >-<
i try to write the second part soon >-<

school is killing me TT TT

[vmaknae10]

Yeah,i wonder if hae is secretly enter the anything that related to haehyuk comm, i mean,who knows ;) . He's totally like a fanboy nowadays ;) . Anw, heechul is jjang ! ^^ ,it's great dear ! Don't worry

[anchovyxfishy]

yeah naee~*-*
kahah it would be cute~ hae as a little haehyuk fanboy X333~
thank u Q-Q wuahh *hugs*

[orien1000]

hi~..
new reader here~..
uh oh~..
what's happening behind the door??? XDDDD
poor hyukie~..
and chulie~ u're jjang!!!
kekekeke

[anchovyxfishy]

hi hiii :333 welcome here XD
behind the door? welll *smirks*
maybe you'll be able to read it soon >D
thanx for reading *_+