Fic: Swear I Was Born Right In The Doorway.

[and_backagain]

Title: Swear I Was Born Right In The Doorway.
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Victor!Peeta/Gale
Spoilers/Warnings: Warnings for discussion of children murdering children (though no descriptions I'd consider graphic; if you read the books or saw the movie, nothing here should take you by surprise).
Summary: For the prompt, "victor!peeta/gale, [au

Comments

[favouriterecord]

This is AMAZING. I love every part of it, but especially how their relationship develops so slowly, how it creeps up on Gale so that he's not even sure what's happening until he's fallen. The way that you write Peeta is amazing. I love every bit of the dialogue, but especially this:

"Mine are-look, I know we've had this conversation before," Peeta says, "but don't get yourself killed, alright?"

I just... Argh. Peeta. I want to hug him SO MUCH here. They are both so in character; you did a great job with preserving their voices. Thank you for writing. <3

[flyingcarpet]

Oooh, I love this. I've seen this concept before but it never really worked for me until now. Great job.

[hypertwink]

I like this. I like how it's almost natural - but not easy - that they fall in love.