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One-Shot - An Education

Nov 25, 2011 07:11

Title: An Education
Author: Andacus
Rating: PG (I guess)
Pairing: Damon/Elena
Notes: Just a little, bitty fic that wrote itself the other day.

( Damon is wrong in all the ways that count and right in all the ways that should. )

fanfic, fic, vd

Comments 19

hopelessalways November 26 2011, 03:13:15 UTC

oh wow. this is just so utterly gorgeous and so...damon and elena. you got them so, so right. bravo.

and this:

The devil loves deeper than the angel, loves truer, loves recklessly. There is no shame in that.

flawless.

andacus November 26 2011, 12:26:20 UTC

You're so lovely for saying these amazing things. Thank you so much!

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andacus November 26 2011, 12:26:38 UTC

♥ Thank you very much!

golden_scarlett November 26 2011, 06:40:44 UTC

This is so beautiful I felt like I was gasping all the way through.
This was my favourite -

"The devil loves deeper than the angel, loves truer, loves recklessly. There is no shame in that."

Loved that.

andacus November 26 2011, 12:27:11 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this. <3

crimsonandebony November 26 2011, 16:07:58 UTC

This was perfect. I loved every last single thing about this. Amazing work.

andacus November 27 2011, 00:45:58 UTC

Awww, thank you very much! ♥

isis_uf November 26 2011, 18:51:13 UTC

Yeah, this is lovely and lyrical and has an almost musical kind of rhythm to it. Your use of imagery and precise words are effective and haunting. It's sparse in the best kind of way. Rockin' job, bb!

andacus November 27 2011, 02:37:01 UTC

Huh, yeah? I think it's sort of jerky and unmeasured, which was the intent, but lyrical is good too!