Sentimental Journey
Chapter 3
Meryl put the jar of moisturizer back on the countertop and massaged the cream into her face. She was still smiling. She'd had such a good time with Don earlier that afternoon. She was just so happy! She really couldn't remember the last time she felt this good and she attributed it all to Don Gummer. She turned off
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You are getting better and better with each chapter you write, God this was so beautifully written. I Love Meryl's reaction to getting the painting and when she realized it was painted by Don I felt chills, her reaction was great. I love how you portray Roy it's just how I imagine him to be. I love the relationship they seem to have. I felt like crying with Meryl when she found the envelope and ran her fingers over the return address, that was such a tender scene I could see it all in my head.
You are some writer Partner, I knew you would be, I can't wait for the next chapter when she opens the letter, I am going to need a box of tissues for it. Well I am off to work on finding pictures for our new LJ acct. I think we have our work cut out for us partner but it is going to be a blast to do it with you ;) Bernadette xxx
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This story is so beautiful
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