Comments | anderbrook: Sentimental Journey Chapter 5

anderbrook

Sentimental Journey Chapter 5

Apr 17, 2011 20:30

Sentimental Journey

Chapter 5

It was nearly noon the next day and Meryl was sitting at her kitchen table reading through a script. She was so thoroughly into the script she almost didn’t hear the banging on her door. Opening the door to a smiling Roy who started laughing when he saw the state of his favorite client and friend, Meryl shook her head ( Read more... )

don gummer, strummer, meryl streep

Comments 6

gummersfan April 18 2011, 02:29:11 UTC

I feel like I write the same thing all the time...I LOVED IT! I LOVE Roy! I love the flashbacks. Everything about it is PERFECTION!

chrissie50 April 18 2011, 17:40:22 UTC

I'm loving this story. You can kind of imagine that this is how it really was when Meryl met Don and i love the way you bring Roy into the story. Keep writing as I love this story xx

beckii_l April 19 2011, 17:07:25 UTC

I so loved this chapter, like always!
Absolutely adored, adored the flashback it was soo cute!
Keep writing as your writing is amazing and I can't wait for your next update! :)
Beckii xx

kendall777 April 19 2011, 17:35:26 UTC

Hey Partner, I have to say this is my favorite chapter so far. Everything about it from the scene with roy to the kiss on the Ferris Wheel by the way I loved, loved, loved the kiss. You really captured the feel of Coney Island during that time, you really did some great job for someone that has never been there you really captured the feel of the amusment park. I have been there a lot and you really made me believe, well done. This was such a fun chapter and so sweet, you have the Cyclone right that is one thrilling ride just like you wrote it. The fun house was so cute with just the right amount of romance, and thank you for the baseball reference withe the milk can game, haha. But as I said my favorite part of this chapter was the Ferris Wheel, with the park being all lite up and them on top of the ride, that was the perfect spot for a heart stopping kiss, and you wrote it perfectly, wow that was some kiss, I really loved that kiss it was perfect.

Great job Partner, I can't wait for chapter 6 ;) Bernadette xx

kim_irene April 21 2011, 21:43:33 UTC

i loved this. :) good going girl! keep at it. can't wait for next chapter. ;)
i've wrote a meryl one, and i've uploaded a challenge for my friends on here.. take a look if you want. :)