Sentimental Journey Chapter 8

[anderbrook]

Hey Girls, I'm so sorry I took so long posting this...I've been having a little trouble lately...some neck problems which lead to my left arm not working for a while...Anyway, here's the latest and I hope you like it...

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Meryl closed the door after Don had passionately said good night...several times.  She closed her eyes and

Comments

[kendall777]

Well Done Partner my god you had me in tears with the John Journal, That letter was heart breaking!!!! I love the butterfly brooch and Meryl's reaction when she saw what it was. Also the way Don blushed when Meryl mentioned the word love was too cute!!!!

The way Meryl told her mom was so very perfect, the picture frame was such a different and wonderful way for her mom to find out, I could picture the frame in my head it was the perfect way for that time era, I loved it.

Now I can not wait to see what Don's reaction is going to be when he finds out, I'm sure you will make it very special and of cause make me cry, haha. Your writing has such a wonderful feel good feeling about it and brings up so many emotions when I read it, I really think your great Partner ;) Bernadette xx

[retrosince90]

you are such a good writer
i like the story line very much
keep going<3

[lizziealchemi]

You're such a talented writer, all your attention to detail and the tone of your story, and the connection you've made between Meryl and Don is amazing! I really enjoy reading each chapter because it feels like opening a present, you never know what to expect! The flashbacks are a really nice touch, it keeps your story interesting and I always love learning about the little pieces of history that Meryl and Don have shared together! Please write another entry soon!! :)
xoxo Lizzie xoxo

[meg22591]

Omg your writing is soooo great. It literally made me cry at a couple parts :'( I just love your story! Hope you continue it soon :)
Meg <3

[c_b49]

Please add me so i can finish ur amazing story!!