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Jul 13, 2011 10:48

Hey girls! I have a question for you...if you read my story what else should I do with it? When I started I really only thought it would be a few chapters if that...Or is anyone even there? Reading I mean...But insecurities aside, your thoughts would be extremely helpful. The writing is a form of therapy but its even better to know that someone ( Read more... )

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gummersfan July 13 2011, 15:58:35 UTC
You know how MUCH I love this story-it's amazing! Your writing is so real-I can't sing your praises enough!!!! I would love to see flashbacks through when Don left for Pearl Harbor and present time through Henry's birth and the other births:) We'll have to chat soon!

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Definatly reading! 73bejee July 13 2011, 16:02:33 UTC
And can't wait for the next chapter:-) I love the setting, them being apart and the longing and the flash back to when they met. I wanna see how Don finds out about the baby, does he get a leave and come to New York or what? Please...

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kendall777 July 13 2011, 22:50:21 UTC
Well you know I am reading and love your writing Partner you have such a wonderful way of writing emotion and detail which is so hard to do and you make it seem so easy. I really think you are so talented!!!! Your The Best Partner ;) Bernadette xx

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sg4ever July 18 2011, 17:03:46 UTC
Then me I love your story but really. This change of all the others, I like also of course.
If I understand you want ideas for your story this is?
Don wants to return and made him crash on the front and at the time he is forced to return.
But not an accident serious hein.
However I don't really have internet or very difficult so I do pourais more comment but read Yes.
I can say immediately that I would like everything that you can write.
Thank you again.

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kimmm_berly July 18 2011, 20:57:34 UTC
i just started reading today and i love it its really great i would like to read more (;

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