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[anderbrook]

The post is changing my format so the part after the......is a flashback. Hope you enjoy

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[kendall777]

Okay partner you did it. Congrat's. Just think of it This is the first of many chapters you will post in this wonderful story and other stories to come like the one you will be writing with your partner haha.. This was so beautifully written I love how you make us see the whole picture with your wonderful descriptive language. I can see it all happening just that way. The flasback was great and left me wanting more. The first meeting was perfect and so sweet. I can't wait to see what chapter 2 brings. Well done ;). Bernadette x

[gummersfan]

I absolutely loved it!!!! I can NOT wait to read more. The way you write is so beautiful and descriptive-I feel like I am in the story!

[sg4ever]

Waaa GREAT :D
Again again again ;)
Sorry but i'm very bad in english