Title: Put Your Hands on Me (and magic sparks) 4/10? [WiP]
Pairing: Blaine/Kurt
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,787 / 20,100 [so far]
Summary: AU. Faeries exist, but are a rarity. Slavery, and more specifically, sexual slavery, is a way of life for many people. || When a boy is lucky enough to get his hands on a half-Faerie boy in an auction, he ends
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I didn't realize until after reading it that this story really makes me feel like I'm reading a book. That is to say, that even if all the details of the room aren't written, I'm picturing it and then getting really into all the emotions you're saying that they're feeling. It's just really a cool thing. haha.
Thank you so much for making me want to write better.
It's kind of ridiculous/amusing how much I approve of this story/you writing it awesomely. I want to continue saying good things, but I'll stop now. D:
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It's a good thing you stopped or I probably would have cried a little, because what you said is really such a wonderful thing to hear. Especially that is makes you want to write better. That's just huge.
Thank you so much. You're so very sweet.
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This is definitely one of my most anticipated WIPs right now, and I'm really loving the world you've set up here, and as much as I feel bad for Kurt, the corner punishment scene was delightful to read. More please! :)
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Thank you very much! I'm so glad you're enjoying this.
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And I normally wouldn't say this in a comment, but you asked for con-crit, so... the timeline structure is difficult to keep up with. I'm quite sure there's a reason it's not linear - and a reason that will pay off in the end - but it does make things a bit difficult to keep straight. Not knocking your style, just an observation. Overall I really, really love this and look forward to the next update!
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And honestly, thanks so much for saying so with the timeline issue. The decision to write it like this is really coming back to bite me in the ass because this was only meant to be a short little thing and the story has exploded, so I'm trying to be careful with it. It is supposed to be a little confusing, but hopefully everything will wrap up neatly by the time we're caught up with the past five days. Thank you very much; I am definitely going to keep a close eye on that.
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