Rule #1; An Unnatural History fic. Another one

[andienook]

Rule #1
genre: romance     
rating: pg
warnings: slash, incest
summary: Jasper just wanted to go home

companion piece to Practicality

Comments

[chibimarchy]

LOL, yes, I knew Maggie had to find out! And I love Henry's line at the end.

[riot_fox311]

Awww, that was awesome! The whole rules thing just seems so in character, and that last line made me giggle a little. I'm glad Maggie doesn't seem to disturbed or anything.

Just one tiny nitpick, I'm not sure if anyone else pointed out, since I haven't read all the comments:

Jasper burst out laughing.
I think that should be "Henry burst out laughing." That would make more sense in context at least. Other than that, though, great fic!

[andienook]

lol, didn't even notice that. fixed. ^^