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[andrealyn]

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[butidigress]

This is perfection. I don't have much else to offer up beyond that. ♥

[andrealyn]

Thank you so much for reading it and I'm glad you liked!

[skyearth85]

I'm in awe. this story has such an incredible plot that seems the perfect "Inception 2: The Fallout" (stupid title is stupid, sorry, but I hope you have catch what I mean)

[andrealyn]

♥ Thank you for reading and I'm glad that you think it felt that way because I was definitely using the movie as a base (I even wrote most of this to the soundtrack, so certain scenes pace according to the tracks!)

[thisissirius]

i love this so much, i don't even have the words.

i am still holding my breath at the end - hoping against hope. THIS IS A DIFFERENT VERSION, OBV. but i would just like to say that ALL OF YOUR EDITING has paid off!

it's amazing and heartfelt and wonderful and i will read again and again ♥

[andrealyn]

THANK YOU FOR READING! And I do know how I project the end in my head, but I wanted to take a cue from the movie and pay a little homage to reader's interpretation.

AND THANK YOU AGAIN FOR YOUR ART!

[dmlpacker]

Oh my goodness, my heart is pounding. I feel like I'm right at the edge of the cliff, waiting to find out exactly how well the inception took. ♥

[andrealyn]

♥ Thank you so much for reading!

[denija]

this is fucking brilliant! ♥ i really don't know what else to say, but the idea, levels, all the details, oh my god, you are a genius, really, to come up with something this big and... wow, just wow.

also, now i feel just like i've seen inception, not knowing how it really ended (i believe it worked :D), but this ending suits the story oh so well.

[andrealyn]

♥ Thank you so much for reading and I'm very glad all the planning paid off. I have my notebook pages of 'messages' and themes and they changed a lot, but I think for the better! I hope!