Comments | andrealyn: Title: Let's Dance Like We Used To

andrealyn

Title: Let's Dance Like We Used To

Feb 24, 2011 22:49

Title: Let's Dance Like We Used To
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 13,487
Disclaimer: Not mine, never owned, though I wished upon many stars.
Summary: There isn't a world in which Danny wouldn't go after Grace. So when Rachel moves the family to California, Danny goes with. Steve gets left to process life without Danny.
Notes: So, ( Read more... )

pairing: steve/danny, fiction: hawaii 5-0

Comments 8

oberstein February 25 2011, 05:50:56 UTC

or something really sane like punch him to bookend their Hawaii relationship.

OH, DANNO.

andrealyn February 27 2011, 20:38:21 UTC

HE LIKES SYMMETRY, OKAY.

abbeyrd62561 February 25 2011, 07:47:44 UTC

I am really enjoying this story so much. It sounds like Steve is going back wards from what Danny is hearing in talking to him and Mary. Oh love the bar with Mary she is something else...excellent. now on to the next page I'm so glad this is not short.

andrealyn February 27 2011, 20:37:41 UTC

♥ Thank you so much for reading and I'm pleased to provide a longfic!

liketheroad February 25 2011, 20:36:30 UTC

YOU ARE MAKING THIS HURT SO GOOD, I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU. Here are some parts that delighted me an especially large amount!

“And hey! Now you’re getting a promotion. Steve’s gonna need a new partner and you have been roundhousing your way into his heart, don’t think he hasn’t noticed.”

THE DESCRIPTION OF HOW STEVE TOOK THE NEWS ABOUT DANNY LEAVING KILLED ME. DEAD.

“I’m not wearing ties, Danny.” ;____; / ♥____♥ STUPID STEVE.

She scoffs. “Like yours is any better? You do know Steve has a picture of you in his bedroom, right?”

“That, I did not know, no, I did not know that,” Danny says, a little shocked by this turn of information, frankly. “Where in the bedroom? I mean, are we talking about hearts drawn around me pinned to the back of the door? Is it in his pillowcase next to his Uzi or is this just one of those pictures with darts in it?”

ADKFSJD AMAZING INTERACTION. NEXT TO HIS UZI. <3333

“Oh, trust me, I know all about the head wound your brother suffered to be the way he is,” Danny says with great sureness, using his hands to ( ... )

andrealyn March 5 2011, 03:15:23 UTC

STEVE JUST HAD HIS HEART BROKEN, HIS SILLY LITTLE HEART, HE DOESN'T KNOW HOW TO REACT.

♥ x forever

americandirrty February 26 2011, 05:03:56 UTC

This story is seriously perfection. I've been wanting someone to write a story where Danny moves away and this has exceeded all of my expectations. I love this!!!

andrealyn March 6 2011, 16:04:19 UTC

♥ I was a little shocked I was the first to get there (of what I've read), so I'm glad to do it justice!